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| 05/13/2003 10:21:19 PM |
Last Cast of the dayby brenquigComment: Greetings from the Critique Club :)
Hi Brenquig...
This is an excellent photo... I love the warm feeling of the sunset... excellent job on exposing this to highlight the moment.
The boat is a really nice element in the way you have integrated it with the sunset. I'm a little disappointed that this photo didn't score better than it did.
Compositionally, I think there possibly were some alternative opportunities to make it stronger... Obviously, I dunno what exists outside this frame, but first of all, I think there is a little too much empty space at the bottom of the frame... I think the boat is running a line too close to the center of the frame for my own personal taste. A simple crop seems to make that disappear and create a slightly stronger image for me.
Excellent work and I look forward to seeing more :)
John Setzler
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