Zecondary Colorz
by Pep Ventosa

Comment:
very interesting abstract... the colors are good but the exposure is a bit hot in places and the imperfections on the material used to create the distortion are a bit distracting in places... = 6

Time for the Ball
by aimee_skittles

Comment:
excellent use of lighting and shallow depth of field... very nice work... = 8

Limoge
by Barb

Comment:
interesting color... the image is a bit soft... can't say that it has much subjective appeal to me personally, but it is an interesting technique shot... = 6

lilly
by jbruno1397

Comment:
the exposure here and the lighting seem to diminish the secondary colors of green and pink... the light is possibly a bit too strong to make the colors stand out very well.. = 5

Rainy Day Greens
by ruthiek

Comment:
interesting composition and the rain is definitely different... I don't feel that this is a great 'secondary color' subject choice even though it is a secondary color... image is slightly soft... = 5

secondary colory
by Aesculapius

Comment:
focus in the lower portion of the image seems just a tad soft... can't see any real reason to have selective focus in the center of the image rather than throughout the whole image... = 5

Secondary Colour Mixture
by Mona

Comment:
Nice detail and the centered composition seems to work ok... = 6

Valor
by Vipermike

Comment:
beautiful work... the composition and color, along with the excellent lighting really make this shot pop... great shot :)

Cabot Tower
by orussell

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Orussell...

The story behind the site you photographed is quite interesting....

I don't know if it would have been possible or not, but a different perspective could have made some improvements in this shot overall... the small building top in the lower right side of the frame is a bit distracting... I'm not sure if you had a way to remove that by shooting from a different angle or not.

The antennae on top of the building also seem to feel a bit odd with the center one cut off by the top of the frame....

The image also has an overall blue cast to it. It looks almost like the image was shot using an indoor white balance mode. Some color correction with photoshop may have been able to clear this up.

As a postcard theme, I think you have a good subject, but I would definitely look for an alternative composition if possible...

John Setzler

Sudbury, Ontario. Home of the world's largest nickel
by BigSmiles

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hi Bigsmiles...

I think this image makes as good a postcard as any... It highlights an element of the community that would attract visitors. I don't think I can suggest any compositional improvements to the photograph....

As for the exposure, I think it may be just a tad under exposed. The color/tonal range looks just a tiny bit flat to me.

The text appears to be a little cramped also. In a postcard shot, it would be important to compose it in such a way that you leave room for any text that you want to add to the image.

Good work :)

John Setzler