Time Stands Still in the Rural South
by dagaleaa

Comment:
been here and seen this and photographed that tricycle before :) Excellent work...

Pollen on the Move
by Gracious

Comment:
I think you need to work on your titles :)

Clear Vision (B&W)
by dg02

Comment:
Personally, i like this better than the color. If it were me, i might bump the contrast about +5 or +8 maybe and see what it looks like.. nice work :)

Desert Moonlight
by dsidwell

Comment:
welcome to the 8 club :)

Friendly Giants guide your Way
by Harz_Joerg

Comment:
the path to hell is paved with good intentions :)

Desert Moonlight
by dsidwell

Comment:
there will be peace in the vally for me someday :)

Late again
by johnm

Comment:
the station buzzes with people and sound
as trains go whizzing by
stop for me and take me home
my request please don't deny
the people here are waiting
for the cars with electric feet
take us from this piercing cold
back home into the heat

The Mayhem of Night
by jonpink

Comment:
City nights and city lights
mayhem on the streets
chaos, intensity
people and sounds
firemen working their beat

Standing Tall
by zeuszen

Comment:
Energy :) Lots of it... nice combination of raw nature and structured urbania in this shot.. nice 'complex' juxtaposition of those elements as well. GREAT SHOT :) +fav

The Fresh Highland Spring
by brownt

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club :)

Hello brownt...

I particularly enjoy water motion photos. A good photograph of this subject creates a sense of motion and sound, and in your case, cold :) The long shutter speed creates a nice silky effect on the moving water, which appeals to me. Your photo captures this effect fairly well, but could possibly use a slightly longer shutter speed to enhance the effect. Looking at your camera settings, it looks like you may have chosen the best setting for the conditions without overexposing, which is good. To get a longer shutter speed without overexposing would have required a neutral density filter.

Your composition on this photo may have some opportunities for improvement in visual impact. Your point of interest in this photo is horizontal in the center of the frame. As my eye moves from bottom to top, following the motion of the water to its source, the main point of interest in mid frame and it becomes less intriguing to me as I move up. Cropping off the top third of this photo seems to remove the uninteresting area and create a stronger compositon for me.

I would also consider a recomposition where your 'dam' traverses the frame diagonally, but not starting and ending in the corners. The diagonal would upset the balance nicely and create another interesting composition. I think this subject is worthy of filling the frame.

Nice work :)

John Setzler