California Dreamin'
by anthonyczaja

Comment:
Beautiful landscape. This is what I would dream of :) I do wish there were more of the PJs as the subject. As it stands now, the landscape commands most of the attention. Since it is aesthetically pleasing and the focus is good, it keeps the interest though. Nice job.

Let me sleep in!!!
by cloe15

Comment:
Cute PJs :) Your colour seems to be a bit off (yellow). WB to tungsten in this situation. You also have quite a bit of noise (grain) in the photo. A lower ISO can fix this. Try to shoot everything indoors at ISO 100 when possible. You will get less noise. :)

Happy Feet
by BAMartin

Comment:
I see where you are going with this, but the execution of the idea might need some tweaking. Your focus is a tad soft. Try USM in photoshop or using a higher f-stop. The PJs are not the subject of this image, the feet are. Perhaps a full body shot would have been better for a PJs challenge. Your colour is off. A little to the yellow side. WB to tungsten or fluorescent indoors depending on what kind of lights you are under. This looks tungsten, fluorescent would be bluer.

sleep walking
by saintaugust

Comment:
Your concept is good. I like the idea that your PJ bottoms have left you and are taking a stroll. I would like to see the whole of the bottoms but I do understand that you had to attach them to something somewhere. :) I lament the lost foot, it makes the image feel a bit cramped. I'd like to see more of the whole scene. Overall, nicely done.

gorilla brand Jungle Jammies
by ambaker

Comment:
Nice concept, but your photo is lacking in focus and PJs. A higher f-stop might have been the way to go here. Of course, it could have been shutter speed. Try setting the camera on a railing or other stable surface for anything below 1/60s. However, your light is great and your exposure is nice.

Bedtime Hero
by cloudsme

Comment:
Your pose and attention to the pajamas is wonderful! Very nicely lit. Very nice catchlights. Nice depth. This image only has 1 thing that is lacking. Contrast. Your colours seem a hair washed out. Otherwise, wonderfully done!

Who needs Pajamas
by Eyesup

Comment:
Good use of DOF. I would like to see more PJs and less underwear in the shot though. That bright window in the back is a major distraction. At the very least, there should be some light on the PJ bottoms on the bed there.

Dreaming of Christmas
by kellyo

Comment:
I hope you aren't just going for the brown ribbon here because this is a serious comment. Your image is blurry. Try using either a tripod for long exposure or a flash so you can speed up your shutter. Your colour is way off. WB to tungsten or fluorescent indoors (depending on what kind of light you use). Your focus is way soft. Your fire looks neat but only serves, in this image, to distract from the subject (PJs).

Early Morning Dog Walk
by xianart

Comment:
The idea is there, but I think it was a little lost in this attempt. You have a very nice B&W conversion here. Light is interesting. I would like to see the PJs take more of a center roll. The dog serves only as a distraction from them here. Perhaps a different angle would have made more of a difference.

ROUGH NIGHT FOR THE BABY-SITTER
by ILOVEMOGIE

Comment:
This is a fantastic concept. Colours are complimentary and work very well together. A few things detract: The babysitter's feet are gone. There is an odd light under the boy's chin. Your background is a bit distracting... Other than that, good job thinking outside the box! :)