Cabbage Patch Kid....Week 11 of PAW
by njsabs

Comment:
ADORABLE! Different and creative. Fantastic child portrait

What We Feel, is More Important than What They Say
by dsmil

Comment:
With such awesome costumes and pretty ladies you could have gone so much more striking and different with the lighting. The lighting being so plain and flat really doesn't fit with the subject matter. I would try going with some darker sharper side and backlighting maybe or something not so flat and light.

Model Scientist
by JohnnyPhD

Comment:
I feel that your concept would have been more effective if she actually was paying attention to what chemicals she is mixing. It is her facial expression and body language that makes her not look like a scientist I think, not really her dress. Also the lighting is a bit harsh it seems to me.

THAT is all that's between us???
by cryingdragon

Comment:
I find it interesting that even though many the comments made were positive the average score of the commenter's still only came out to five. The best thing that I can say is to just take all the feedback you get with a grain of salt. The voters here can be really close minded, having created a set of dpc expectations that true art doesn't necessarily have to meet. If people fail to see the significance of how small the fence is and the tension created by that then that is their problem. Just keep allowing yourself to grow and find your own personal calling as an artist and follow it, don't let us hold you back.

Connection
by cloudsme

Comment:
This would say intimacy to me more if she didn't look so tense and uncomfortable. This makes their situation seem more out of place than intimate in my opinion.

Shared Moments
by dwterry

Comment:
This is beautiful! It is cool that you left it in color though because people tend to make this kind of shot black and white so they can depend on the nostalgia of it, but you have relied on the lovely candid moment, good framing and depth of field to make a strong color image. Nice

Cold Weather, Warm Family
by Pelle

Comment:
I love the repetition pattern going on with the monkey's faces. They look so cuddly this is a perfect shot for intimacy

You make me shine
by mflakke

Comment:
Haha! Awesome personification. Very simple and direct. I like this a lot

Secrets
by imagesbytlp

Comment:
lovely. The girl on the right looking into the camera just makes this. Beautiful image

Intimacy Exposed
by Quasimojo

Comment:
HAHA. what an awesome wide angle image. Very unique take on intimacy, but really...that is as intimate and vulnerable as someone can get without being sick in bed all snotty and throwing up. Nice bw