Portrait of a Jumper
by darnok

Comment:
nice detail in the spider and whatever it is sitting on. i think this is just a tad oversharpened though but it gives it a cool alien feel. nice different angle...not sure if i like it because i automatically turned my head and now after staring at it for a minute my neck hurts :) but yeah cool macro!

In The Moment
by alonzo76ok

Comment:
ohhh nice! this must have been a tough shot to catch. you probably didn't have many opportunities to catch this but i think that the sun being right there behind him makes it feel a little cramped. i love the detail in the wave in the water

Desolate Beauty
by Breeee123

Comment:
great model! i think the photoshoping is a bit overdone though. It is smooth in some places and then the lighting gets harsh in others, it doesnt all seem to flow together as well as this could.

Untitled
by GThumbtack

Comment:
To me there isn't really much composition here, there is not focal point and having the tree right in the middle makes it a bit stagnant. exposure on the darker bushes is night but the blown out leaves take away from this in my opinion

Fishermen's Creek
by elluls

Comment:
nice textures, could be a bit sharper i think. maybe a little bit too much hdr seems a little more neon than what i normally like. this is nicely composed though, great placement of the boats in the frame and i especially like the added touch of the reflections

Brook 1.jpg
by dssagent88

Comment:
I think that it is delightful! in her cheeks and eyes there is something going off with the focus though, like it was slightly burred and then oversharpened, this is something i have struggled with and see as a semi issue in this shot:
(this is just a very very nitpicky thing)
I think this can be fixed by doing a usm with a very small radius and high percentage...try it out i am not sure.

otherwise great job with the lighting, i love the catch lights in her hair! it makes her dark hair stand out from the black background. I think this could use just a tad more light from the bottom to get rid of some of that shadow on her neck and put more light in her eyes, this could be done by just positioning a reflector to bounce the light back up.

:-D ADORABLE KID!

The Jezebel Spirit
by grigrigirl

Comment:
WOW! I just watched the slide show and I am blown away! I love your post processing. the series is wonderful and emotive. what a great shoot!

Free study outtake
by TOY

Comment:
fabulous! i love the highlights on her nose and shoulders, her hair gives some AWESOME textures to this,

Where Shadows Fall
by sherpet

Comment:
this works very well in black and white, i like the details in the leaves

Walker
by Tiberius

Comment:
i love how the silhouette looks like a shadow in itself!