194.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
For the full body shot, this one is the nicest of this group. I would try to darken the bright top of the rail a little, as bright areas tend to draw the viewers attention to them.

223.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
This one seems to have the nicest light and the most natural and comfortable pose. It's a bit wide angle for a portrait, lncluding the RR track may not be the best idea, as I don't see many girls who look this nice walking on RR tracks. From her hair tips to the top of her head, and with the two small branches cloned out, this would be the best of the bunch IMHO. I don't think it would crop that much and still have enough resolution to be excellent.

178.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
The bright sunlight in her eyes made her squint in this one. She just looks very uncomfortable with the bright light.

110.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
This is a sweet pose and smile, even the eyes are smiling. The bits of redness in her complexion are a little distracting. I like the composition. I would use the burn tool a bit on the bright shoes.

083.jpg
by bennettjamie

Comment:
Wider aperture and less DOF would have helped with this one. It would reduce the strong texture of the tree behind her head.

the apple tree.JPG
by dsterner

Comment:
This is a very nicely composed shot, and the snow haze adds a dimension to the wintery look of the image. Nice story too.

California Cows? Do We Look Happy?
by Hipychik

Comment:
That has to be uncomfortable. Excellent image, and the pose is perfect.

Ha ena Beach Day 19
by slaakso

Comment:
This is a nice looking place to go. It looks like it was breezy and hazy.

Ha ena Beach Erosion Day 19
by slaakso

Comment:
This is an almost abstract looking image. That's very interesting the way the wet stone interacts with the light in this shot.

Day eighteen USS Turner Joy.jpg
by Photomouse

Comment:
The clouds worked for this shot. I like all the details to look at in this image.