Untitled
by Judi

Comment:
Kita? Love the light on her hair.

A lesson in seduction
by gpuretic

Comment:
Slightly over-sharpened, but nonetheless, an appealing portrait.

Rainy pink
by Melethia

Comment:
That is just so, so beautiful. Would make a wonderful card.

Double Trouble!
by Silent-Shooter

Comment:

Originally posted by Silent-Shooter: Originally posted by SaraR: I was one of your 7s - thought it technically very good, although it didn't resonate as much with me as a final image. I'm curious as to how you got the hands to disappear entirely behind the teeth, rather than having some ghosting. It is quite simple really. I had my palms facing straight up (as though I was pushing on the ceiling). It also helped that the flash was fired by hand from a low position (see the knee shadow)so the palms were almost perfectly black. I just happened to get get good positioning after about 40 shots... the other shots overlapped badly or were no where near the teeth. Hope that clears up a few issues.

That makes sense. An intriguing shot.

fashionIMG_2539dramatic
by Kelli

Comment:
Coming back to this shot, it really is, or m, much, much better than the one you entered - the 'in your face' expression of your model (which is thoroughly contemporary) really suits the head-on composition. The processing style, which is probably a little more processed than I prefer, also works better; of note, in the original there was some ugly shading around the nose which really stood out for me - here everything is more balanced. I still feel that you could pull back on the processing a bit, and would end up with a better image for it - you have a stunning model, and your photography itself is good - let them shine through!

Edit - an afterthought, I think that the style you have gone for would be complemented by an off-centre composition, with the model on the 1/3rd and plenty of negative space to the right.

Message edited by author 2010-05-06 14:57:47.

fashionIMG_2539dramatic
by Kelli

Comment:
I think this much better than your actual entry!

Double Trouble!
by Silent-Shooter

Comment:
I was one of your 7s - thought it technically very good, although it didn't resonate as much with me as a final image. I'm curious as to how you got the hands to disappear entirely behind the teeth, rather than having some ghosting.

all you need
by tnun

Comment:
I was one of your 8s - I thought this very well done indeed.

Someone
by wildiris

Comment:
No, NO,

Return to Brokeback Mountain
by sfmorris

Comment:
So, so wrong! I am certainly looking forward to the revealing of the warped mind that is behind this concept.... really well done-good photography, good design, good editing.