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| 08/21/2010 09:46:58 AM |
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| 08/21/2010 09:45:09 AM |
Still Lifeby michelaudetteComment: Interesting modern take and an aesthetically pleasing composition. The mono conversion could do with some work, in particular there are no true whites. Your choice of lighting has led to a rather flat image. Over all, an image with some real potential, but a bit more attention to lighting and mono conversion needed to make it fully successful. |
| 08/18/2010 02:25:08 PM |
Still Life With Pearsby CJinCAComment: The compositional structure is fine, but this doesn't really work for me over-all. The basket of dried flowers looks messy and bitty, and is quite confusing to the eye - possibly better in colour, and part of the challenge is making the right choices for mono conversion. The lighting doesn't really help your photo - side lighting, which you seem to be using is a good choice, but your set-up with the ultra black foreground and background blots out the essential shadows. There seems to be something a bit strange going on with the pear lying in the dish, possibly some JPEG artefact's from post processing? All in all, a good effort, but if you repeat the exercise, I feel that you need to concentrate on reproducing textures and shadows. |
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| 08/18/2010 02:18:29 PM |
dried flowersby curtpetguyComment: I like your idea and the composition, but feel that there is some way to go with the lighting before this would be truly successful. |
| 08/18/2010 02:12:26 PM |
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| 08/18/2010 01:27:40 PM |
Singing Bowlby bspurgeonComment: Lovely rendition of textures throughout the photo, and pleasing tones. Compositionally I would prefer the mallet to be placed a little more to the lower right to make use of some of that empty space. |
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| 08/18/2010 01:23:19 PM |
YYYby h2Comment: Been done so, so, so many times before, but despite the lack of originality, it is an aesthetically pleasing photo. As a technical exercise it really can't be faulted. |
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| 08/18/2010 01:13:58 PM |
Tranquillityby sfaliceComment: A pleasing set up, but let down by the lighting, and most particularly by the lack of clarity and detail in the textures. |
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| 08/18/2010 01:13:02 PM |
Oreotiniby snafflesComment: I find this almost uncomfortable to look at, very bright, and rather harsh. I find the foreground/background blend quite disorientating and adds to my visual discomfort. I am sure this will appeal to some, just not me. |
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| 08/18/2010 01:10:01 PM |
Dreary Dayby tvsometimeComment: Some interesting textures here, and I can see why you were drawn to photograph this, although in this instance I'm personally not keen on your choice of centered composition. |
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