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| 07/12/2015 04:09:33 AM |
Headshot for a filmby PompouspeteComment: Greetings from the critique club
Couple of things stand out for me with this image as to why you didn't score better.
Composition: For this specific challenge which was head & shoulders portrait, I found the framing to be too tight. I would have preferred a couple of steps backward to give the neck and shoulders more emphasis.
Exposure: You elected to go for a high key over exposed look to this one, but I don't think it works very well. I took the liberty of opening the image in PS and found it much more pleasing with the exposure dropped back by 2/3 stop.
Focus: Great job with the focus considering you shot at 1.8. It's hard to keep all the right bits in focus with such shallow Depth of Field.
Overall I thought this had potential and with a couple of small changes it could have scored better. |
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| 07/10/2015 12:28:58 AM |
short songby 2mccsComment: One of my top picks for this challenge Marla. Love it |
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| 07/10/2015 12:27:31 AM |
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| 07/10/2015 12:26:33 AM |
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| 07/10/2015 12:09:02 AM |
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| 07/10/2015 12:03:26 AM |
LA LA LA LA LAby PennyStreetComment: still think it's the best in the challenge and a travesty that it doesn't have a higher score |
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| 07/07/2015 03:27:08 PM |
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| 07/06/2015 12:24:37 PM |
warholaby bvyComment: Didn't vote this challenge. But I have to say, I really do like this, and had I voted, you would have been in trouble, as that 6+ would have been higher still :) |
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| 07/05/2015 09:58:15 AM |
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| 07/05/2015 09:58:00 AM |
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