Sunscreen
by EssAreDubya

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An argument can be made that this is motivating people to use sunscreen, but a more widely accepted notion of motivational posters would likely classify this as some sort of public service or health awareness announcement. Judging from the large amount of 4's voted, I'm guessing a lot of people liked the image and voted down a bit for the message.

The shot itself is nice. Decent composition and lighting, if a little blown out on the woman's legs.

The font itself is a bit lack luster, and fails to deliver its message with impact. In these posters, how the message is presented is as important as both the image used and the message itself. It's a complete package and all three really need to be on the spot for the overall effect to work. Let's face it, these posters are pure propaganda and propaganda is an art unto itself.

Good luck!

When the winds of life blow, bend if you must but dont you break
by Delta_6

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This shot had all the elements of a high scoring motivational poster, but a few things held it back.

The image itself is great and well composed. It almost screams 'slap some text on me and let's make a poster!'. It really needs increased contrast to get the tree to pop out of the rest of the scene. Also shooting this from a lower point of view so that the tree itself would be framed entirely by sky rather than by the horizon split would also give it more weight.

The phrase you chose works very well with the imagery. The layout of the text and the font used are also nice.

I think people had a fairly concrete notion of what these posters should look like as far as font and overall graphical design, and this poster is very different from that standard. That is probably the largest reason this didn't score higher.

Nonetheless, a very creative and well designed poster. If you choose to follow the herd-think next time this challenge pops, you will no doubt be a top contender.

Beauty - Appreciate Simplicity
by Kathe

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This was such an odd challenge, and the voters seemed to expect a pretty standard type of 'poster'. While this is a nice combination of image and phrase, it doesn't immediately come across as motivational and can be (and likely was) interpreted as just a pleasant platitude on the benefit of appreciating the simple things in the world.

The font and placement of text on the poster also moved away from people's notion of what these posters should look like. There's nothing wrong with it, it's just different and likely different enough to have affected the score. I do think the placement of the words in the frame is ok, and the size change of the font was a good approach.

The photo itself is nicely lit with some good details around the water droplets. A bit deeper focus might have given this a bit more pop as much of the twig is blurred out in prominent areas of the overall poster.

Overall this isn't bad and it picked up a slightly above average score as a result. Good work!

The Great Blue Heron
by SouthCoastOr3gon

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A good shot is a good shot, even if it's "just a bird". This shot scored well and rightfully so. The level of detail on the bird is stunning and you got this shot at a great time of day when the light was very flattering.

Quite nice, well done.

The Children of Biak Island
by ilphoto

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Lighting on the child and the fence he is leaning on are great. Tilt of the fence and blownout background, not so great.

Perhaps cropped so the child and the right portion of the fence fill the scene (placing the face on a thirds intersection most likely), would be an even more dramatic composition.

Very nice shot, well done!

Prefigurement of Loss
by posthumous

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I really have no background or credentials for commenting on graphical art. I think you did a good job with the painting, and this looks like a lot of pieces of art in this genre that I have seen before, so I have to assume that it is a good example of what it is.

Nuthatch
by stargazer05766

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Wonderful detail, good lighting, good focus. I think swimming in a sea of green doesn't allow this fellow to show off asmuch as he could with a tighter crop.

Very well shot.

Tiger Paws
by TommyMoe21

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This is so unnatural looking as to be jarring. Still, I do like the symmetry and I think a tighter crop would really show off this effect well. It is probably a love/hate sort of thing, so may as well crop it to give the mirror tiger all of the real estate. Beyond the reflecting - great lighting, perfect exposure and dead-on sharpness. Really good shot.

Yak on the Prowl
by Node

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This is a very dark image. Shooting shiny planes can be difficult as exposing for the highlights will underexpose most of the rest of the shot as it has here. Also the evidence of some cloning on the right side of the frame stands out.

Shot earlier or later in the day when the lighting was better would probably make a shot like this work even better.

Coming In
by Coley

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Good eye for the natural framing around the boater, and the silhouettes work very well against themuted orange tones. I think a tighter crop, even at the expense of the sky, might make this image look even better.

Nice stuff!