Stop bureaucracy
by hajeka

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Interesting photo that works well in b/w. Layout of the poster is fine. What really holds this back is the lack of any clear message. What is it you are motivating people to do? Shred? Use less paper?

Something will always grow
by xianart

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Great photo. I like the trnslucent Decay font, butthis probably would have felt more anchored with the large text at the bottom of shot.

Words like 'screw' don't often find their way into motivational posters, lol. Still your message was certainly clear enough!

Grab Life
by LanndonKane

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A very odd aspect ratio for this poster entry. Font is a bit lackluster. Your message is clear and the stone gathering moss in the photo complements your message nicely.

The sky looks very artifical in large part because of the lighting on the beach being so jarringly different than that which a sunset would provide.

Determination-Success is performed not by strength but by determination.
by Rino63

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I'm not sure why this would have pulled a 4.8. The image is ok and it worksokwith your message. I would reference some of the other posters in the challenge and take some notes on how to place your text on the poster for more impact. The wording of your phrase is slightly odd, but I know this is not your native tounge (still it may be worth asking someone privately before the challenge justto be sure).

Overall I thought this was a decent entry. Good luck!

Someone Special
by Olyuzi

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Beautiful butterfly capture. Following more of a classic 'motivational poster' design and including a keyword which embodies the messsage you convery here would probably have jumped this up quite a bit in the ranking. Still at 5.9, the photo itself was obviously appreciated by many and rightfully so.

Be a friend Talk or listen to some one.
by psart

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Well looking at most of the other entries in the challenge, this one did not really offer up any sort of poster but rather a snapshot of some animals. I think this disconnect between entry and challenge (or at least challenge expectations) is really all there is to provide feedback on here.

"Music should be inevitable, but not predictable."
by skasuba

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Nice image that worked well with your quote. The text itself sort of disappears into the photo. It should really be the first thing about the poster that catches the eye. Photo is nice. Could be a bit sharper and it might have been good to level out that horizon line a bit if it didn't make the towers look wonky.

Balance
by aliqui

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This was a very solid entry and its score shows that to be true.

Thefont of the quote is a bit hard to make out at these small image sizes, but given the wordiness you only had so much real estate to work with.

Little bit more contrast in the photo, and if possible to do so without introducing other problems it would be even better were that log perfectly horizontal.

Overall this was great. Scored well, but I'm suprised it didn't place a bit higher.

It's better to finish last, than to not start at all
by Scapeshots

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I thought this was a creative entry, held back in large part by a rather lackluster font.

Having your keyword in the image itself is really great.

One thing I didn't get (and still don't) is why the turtle is facing away from the starting line.

TEAMWORK
by SamDoe1

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I thought this was a funny entry, but also one that presented the motivational poster 'package' perfectly. Image matching message, font, design - all dead on.

The lighting isn't the best on the cups, but what really threw me (given my assumption that this was a reference to drinking games) was why these cups weren't filled with beer?

Perhaps you play drinking games with 12oz. cups of vodka. Truly you are a braver man than I.