Green
by mobster

Comment:
Congrats on your new personal best! You're 4 for 4 on improving. :)

I entered a smoke shot, too, but it didn't do as well as yours. I like your smoke collection. I'm gonna have to keep playing with it myself.

Zahara Plays
by SandyP

Comment:
Hey, somehow I missed your putting this your portfolio. Look at those comments! :) Told ya it was a great shot.

Feb-6-New-Hope-PA.jpg
by JerseyGenie

Comment:
Love the composition! I suggest learning about levels, curves, and using unsharp mask to really make things pop with contrast. With that, this shot would really zing!

Feb-7-Sculpt-Garden-2.jpg
by JerseyGenie

Comment:
I like the statue and the colors a lot! I'd try cropping off the stuff to the right of the tree, though. Use that strong vertical line as your right edge instead.

A bit of color in a sad place
by JerseyGenie

Comment:
I can't help thinking the title should be "a bit of life in a sad place" because my attention goes right to the big tree in the foreground. If you wanted to do that, then change the title. :) If you want to make the orange tree the subject, surrounded by the always-interesting and emotional geometry of the gravestones, try it from another angle next time. And give me a call when you're here so we can shoot together! :)

Day-6-Rural-Ontario..jpg
by Ivory

Comment:
This is just so inviting. I want to walk over there and see what's over the hill. :)

Two.jpg
by Ivory

Comment:
This is just wonderful. The bucolic scene is gorgeous and the unusual "pose" of the horses makes this stand out.

Day-8,-Oshawa-Ontario,-Cana.jpg
by Ivory

Comment:
WOW! You certainly have the knack for bringing out drama in the sky.

Delight of the Bee
by SandyP

Comment:
"Buried in mediocrity." LOL. Congrats on the high score and high placement! Having both the plant and the bee sharp really focuses my attention.

use of creativity and lighting to creates a GOOD image of rook visiting million dollars oregon views
by charliebaker

Comment:
Hmm. So many thoughts. Is this really Whiterook's? Probably not. Is it a spoof or a tribute to him? Probably a tribute.

However, if you're going for the brown ribbon, it would help to not be quite so obvious about it.From the poorly done rotation to the blur to the badly worded title, it's just too much. If this was a sincere entry, though, then you now have a list of a few things that are wrong. :)