Day 14: Curls
by EstimatedEyes

Comment:
The focus seems a touch off, though you may have wanted that. Beautiful capture of a lovely face. You literally caught the sparkle in her eyes.

day-15
by digitalpins

Comment:
This is a bit flat. I think a little more contrast would make the graffiti stand out better. Also, you could play with perspective and angle - take the shot from the edge of the box looking down the wall, for instance.

Day 15: Andrew at the Shed
by jasonlprice

Comment:
Great candid moment. My only suggestion might be to crop it to the bottom of the beam in the upper right corner. The remaining horizontal shadow would act as a frame at the top, and there'd still be the the mystery of "what's at the end of the string?".

I Dream of Raindrops
by walrus451

Comment:
Great detail and wonderful tones. I really like the soft focus on this.

Day 14 - Pete Yorn
by WalesP

Comment:
Well composed with a clear view of everyone on stage. Good exposure and great tones from white to black.

in the breeze
by ordinaryangel

Comment:
I like the simplicity of this. Interesting color choice.

Secret Garden
by ordinaryangel

Comment:
Very creative idea. I'd like to see more through the opening. Did you move closer?

The Grass
by ATAPE

Comment:
Personally I like this one better. The grass stands out better without the distracting color behind it.

B&W Day 10
by emily212

Comment:
Nice composition with good contrast. As dtremain says, it could be better focused.

The Singer Set Up
by Quigley

Comment:
A trip to Home Depot (or Lowe's - I'm not advertising here) will land you a few inexpensive "desk" lamps of varying heights and proportions. Nice to have variable wattage switches if you can get them, or make a dimmer box out of parts from the bins. If you'd like a better description of how to make one PM me and I'd be glad to explain. With several variable light sources you can set up the shot the way it will look best through your viewfinder.