Day 16 - Me & Mom
by bs-photos

Comment:
I really love this perspective. You both look larger than life, and yet it is still a very intimate moment.

Day 16 - Waiting for a ride
by shalrath

Comment:
Your not happy with this because...? There is an interesting story, good detail, great tonal range, and nothing is overexposed or lost in shadow. I'd say its a great success.

gutter.jpg
by electrolost

Comment:
I'm glad I'm done with that part of my life. And, this shot truly captures the essense of waking up and feeling like crap one more time. Never thought I'd say this, but nice gutter shot.

Day 15 - Stephen Marley
by WalesP

Comment:
A well composed shot with good detail and tonal range. Tough lighting situation, but you handled it well.

Day 16 - End of Day
by BarbB

Comment:
Great choice of subject. I love the dog meandering by in the foreground. Your depth of field is a little shallow, however, so that the shack isn't in focus while the dog is. Setting your aperature (f stop) a notch or two higher to 5 or 5.6 (or whatever the settings are on your camera)will increase your dof and make your picture sharper front to back. Because you are shooting at sunset, you may need to increase your ISO to 200 or 400 before you can change the aperature. If you already know all that and intended a shallow dof, please excuse my rambling.

against the odds
by ordinaryangel

Comment:
Very creative and fun shot. Nice lighting.

Day 15: Sky
by EstimatedEyes

Comment:
My only problem with this as a silhouette (besides having to spell it) is the lack of a defining shape. While there is an outline of the land against the sky, the only shape is the tree. Perhaps a closer crop isolating the tree would work for the challenge. Just a thought.

Day 14: Curls
by EstimatedEyes

Comment:
The focus seems a touch off, though you may have wanted that. Beautiful capture of a lovely face. You literally caught the sparkle in her eyes.

day-15
by digitalpins

Comment:
This is a bit flat. I think a little more contrast would make the graffiti stand out better. Also, you could play with perspective and angle - take the shot from the edge of the box looking down the wall, for instance.

Day 15: Andrew at the Shed
by jasonlprice

Comment:
Great candid moment. My only suggestion might be to crop it to the bottom of the beam in the upper right corner. The remaining horizontal shadow would act as a frame at the top, and there'd still be the the mystery of "what's at the end of the string?".