Portrait Of A Lady
by Makka

Comment:
very nice, great lighting, processed effectively

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Lotus - [Or Dude jumpin in woman´s swimsuit]
by russi

Comment:
great shot, I'm not sure about your ideas here but its effective in making me stop and think - my only criticism is the title. Let the photograph tell the story.

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Untitled
by Gnarf

Comment:
I like this photography and this type of photography in general, so I hope this does well. From a techinical standpoint only a few problems - the most telling is the distortion on the building and the lack of vertical lines on the R, the window seems vertical to the pipe but not to R side of the picture. Also a bit contrasty on his face, plus the white box behind the man is a problem. From a compostional standpoint you really have 4 separate ideas, each pulling the viewer and each pulling the viewer out of the picture - the man facing and walking out, the window half finished, the large non-finished rectangle in the lower R, and the lamp in the upper L. In order for the picutre to really work they either need to tell a story or they need to be equally powerful to keep the viewer coming back to the others. I don't quite get your story here, and I'm not sure about the power of each idea, but I really like your effort.

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floaters
by k4ffy

Comment:
this is really just too contrasty for me to find a place for my eye to stay with. the cars on the lower part of the picture don't work either

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Night and the City
by bood

Comment:
interesting composition, I like the lighting, although the reflection of the soft box in the glasses takes away from the mood and makes it look set-up. To me the composition just doesn't quite pull together though - you have the man, the inside of building and the outside city but they just don;t connect very well

good try and technically excellent, (including the smoke)
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Tentative Steps
by nadiaC

Comment:
nice moment and cropping, the water at the top of the image is just too bright and contrasty to work well though

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Mommy?
by wsteyn

Comment:
great lighting, nice warm colours. ideally more light on his face and less on his rump but nice you caught his eye

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Omega
by Qart

Comment:
I think this would be better w/o the sunglasses, but obviously that was what you were looking for. the lighting is fantastic.

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Porcelain
by librodo

Comment:
excellent 8

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Mercury waters
by Arancha

Comment:
really nice 7

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