dump
by TMsmile

Comment:
I think you've cropped/zoomed too much and much of the details are lost.. I can see this is a really nice idea but the execution is a let down..

Black Powder
by rkligman

Comment:
hah! cool image.. I amost wish you'd captured one two people more closely in a more portrait-esque fashion.. Would have created interest with more details..

The Stack
by MAKamyk

Comment:
I almost want to see more of the tower's neck but it's fine the way it is.. like the tilt of the smoke..

Innocence polluted
by genevieve

Comment:
Moving subject! I would have liked a less squarer image and wanted more negative space of water. perhaps going b/w with this image would have helped make the lighting seem less orange-ish..

Dawn of Industry
by The_Dentist

Comment:
This is an interesting use of the road and works well with the industrial feel.. but I do think you've wasted potential use of details in the buildings and they almost seem like negative spaces which I don't like..

Columns of steam
by Brin

Comment:
Really brave choice of lighting, using it to create silhouette-ish subject .. I love the sky this creates with the smoke but I can almost see interesting details around of the base of the building and it makes me want to see more..

Dancers Likes, Environment Minds !!!!!!!!
by ankit_mohabansi

Comment:
I really wish you'd kept the dancers out of the image because the light itself would have been more interesting and the dancers seem to red and underexposed and don't add more to the composition..

doing something
by kolasi

Comment:
Very cool find and interesting colours, composition.. The only thing that lets it down is the lighting. The whole image seems to be overexposed and too bright losing quite a bit of the details..

Night Fumes
by Hauxon

Comment:
Interesting image.. Really like the glow of the sky and the streamlined smoke trail. but maybe it would have been more interesting composition if you had been closer and the image had been using the longness of the building.

Heavy Metal Fishing
by vlado

Comment:
Nice soft colours and lighting but I think the framing should have been with the fisher man more to the right [and more light. He's just not very obvious in that darkened corner] and I find the connection between pollution and just the one man slightly vague.. maybe it's rigs [behind the man] that you're alluding to. I'm not sure..