Canon digital photography - for the beauty in life
by ss

Comment:
Nice mirror work!. If you'd moved slightly to your left to get both eyes in and had more even lighing on your face it would be about perfect.

Realm
by shortredneck

Comment:
"Ream Womin"? The composition is okay, except that the bottle really ought to face into the frame instead of out. Lighting could be much better - the cap is just a mess of reflections and hotspots. This kind of thing - chrome and glass - is very hard to do, but I think you could do better than this even without studio gear. Try some white foam core to take control of the light and reflections next time. Also seems oversharpened.

Dog ate your homework?
by defrosted

Comment:
I'm guessing that this is a Jansport parody. You can get away without a logo here thanks to the suede bit. Poor Scooby! Don't mind the blown bg, but wish it didn't spill over onto the bag.

ABSOLUT drown
by censura

Comment:
Interesting subjects and arrangement, but doesn't really follow the Absolut theme without the bottle. Holding a white card between the lightsource and the glass might have toned down those reflections, and another angle would probably be more interesting.

salt that stings
by ritaard

Comment:
I'm guessing the title is the tag line of an ad I haven't seen. Assuming that, it's very, very good photography. OOF foregrounds usually bother me, but in this case it just makes the point of that one needle that much closer to my eye. You might have panned right just a bit to include more of the needles / less of the not so perfect background. Can't wait to find out what this one is for.

Have you always wanted to drive a classic? Visit Mannie's Used Cars
by tyd

Comment:
Nice B/W, but it doesn't make a very good product shot or ad for a used car lot.

Simple Elegance
by karmat

Comment:
It's a beautiful setup, but the shadows on the bag are just too deep.

Listen to 94.9ZHT
by snoopy

Comment:
The way the flash worked on the lettering is interesting, a little, and there's a bit of sunrise or sunset reflected in the window (albeit with utility lines and poles). Don't see much else to recommend this, though.

What's better on a warm summer day?
by Palli747

Comment:
Pretty girl and a nice setting. The hard side lighting would be improved with some fill, or a reflector, or turning the whole scene so the subjects faced in to the sun. I'd have asked her to hold the bottle with more of the logo on the label showing, as well, and maybe used a bottle with more Pepsi inside. Do they really have green labels, or is that a WB issue (I live at the edge of the earth)?

Mr. Big
by bruster54

Comment:
If you'd found a patch of open shade you could have avoided the overexposure on the head of the driver and cover logo, and the colors might have snapped a little better. The patch of grass you chose doesn't look too well tended, and the white glare at R of the bg and dark area at L (interferes with the shaft) are unfortunate. It's a good composition, but would have benefited from a bit more care in the execution.