getting higher
by MichaelC

Comment:
nice, but a little too scapshotty. cropping the bottoma bit to lose the ground under the beam might help, as well as the left side. darkening hte background would also help. the flash light is a little harsh - it might have been nice with ambient light and a bit of motion blur.

Jump, Nippin, Jump
by jorr

Comment:
a nice idea, but the lack of focus and the harsh flash light let you down. well cropped and composed. if the background were darker, that would also help.

Jump!
by ralfw

Comment:
it could be nice, but the poor focus lets you down. ideally, the dog would be in sharp focus, and the background (which is a bit cluttered and distracting) would be in deep unfocus (yeah, i know it's not word...).

Vertigo
by marvin

Comment:
what a great idea. it does give me vertigo, just looking at it. however, the tones are a little flat, i'd like it more if it had the full tonal range. 5

5/30
by Pedro

Comment:
excellent! startred my day with a smile.

Alphabet Soup with Quackers
by BeeCee

Comment:
very good indeed! top 50, well done. i like the colours, compo and focus. nice one.

Save The Life Of My Child
by GeneralE

Comment:
such a good idea, but really let down by the quality of the image. if the lighting was a bit better, or the contrast, or the levels. i think it really needs to be reshot, with a tiny bit of bounce on the underside of the shoes, to show what they are, and framd to avoid the hand? on the right side. keep trying with this, you're onto a good one!

Not the jumping type...
by GuGi

Comment:
i wish wish wish she was in focus

one maple leaf
by claudia26

Comment:
lovely. great colours, comp and focus. but it's a plane tree leaf...

primary focus
by bikefreak

Comment:

Originally posted by xianart: my god this is stunningly annoying. i take it it's supposed to be? i love the colours though. very brave.

just to let you know, i gave you a 6 on this. and i agree, it would be beter on a large scale. it does kind of do my eyes in on the monitor...

i do apologise for sounding rather rude in my first comment. i was trying to be flip and humourous. didn't work, did it? i did mean the very brave bit though.

Message edited by author 2006-04-05 22:40:15.