Self Portrait
by Ben

Comment:
Nice capture of facial expression, nice minimalistic use of detail: the face is drawn with simple shapes of black on white.. I think the excessive horizontality isn't helping you, it just draws attention to itself. I would try reducing it to cinema proportions. I don't mind the focus on the wall except that the texture isn't interesting enough. Perhaps if you cropped the left side you would fix both of my problems.

Falls the Shadow
by posthumous

Comment:
I was amused by people not liking the shadow. I mean, maybe they're right and I didn't do a good job of integrating the shadow into the composition, but without the shadow this would be so bo-o-o-ooring.

Missing you
by scaramanga

Comment:
I'd be interested to hear how you feel you have made this sculpture your own.

(Listen...)
by cogerox

Comment:
I think you should crop a little off the right. 6

The Morse's New Baby
by militarygirl10

Comment:
I like that everyone is facing the baby instead of the camera, but I'm not crazy about the "floating heads" effect.

The World in her eyes
by TTDPCCPhoto

Comment:
I predict a ribbon for this. 9 bump to 10

Ride At First Light
by ShannonLee

Comment:
Great capture and a really beautiful composition. 9 bump to 10

Disconnected
by Nefir

Comment:
Hopperesque, a moving portrait of isolation with a perfect title. 9 bump to 10

Rippler
by 'Pong

Comment:
Extra points for overexposing the highlights to create a field of negative space. 7

Vortex
by gg3rd

Comment:
This is not an entirely original idea, but I've never seen it on DPC before and it is well executed. In fact, I've only seen it in video, not a still. It works well as a still, though I'm sure it's harder to pull off that way. 8