MY DOMAIN
by Gordon_1

Comment:
It feels like you have tried to process this to make something out of a shot that wasn't really up to much?

Black Hawk
by C4Pictures

Comment:
A helicopter in (almost) silhouette, ok but not great

Reward of the Climb
by markreed

Comment:
I like that you have tried to compose this well

Accross the Universe at the Speed of Light
by dcanossa

Comment:
Colourful

Rockafella
by okky

Comment:
A good record of being at the concert but it doesn't really say much to the viewer other than "I was there"

A Different Perspective
by hammy

Comment:
This is a different perspective but this isn't a shot I find myself wanting to look at for long

"Itchy, Flakey, Scalp ?"
by Wraith Ravenscroft

Comment:
Don't take this the wrong way but as I see DPC as a learning experience here is my frank critique:

This comes across as a snapshot. By that I mean that I feel that anybody standing where you were with a camera could have gone click and got this result. I think a photographer should aim to do more than that. I may be wrong and perhaps you do have more of a story to your shot but the fact is that it doesn't come across to the viewer.

As an example, if you were in Paris and saw the Eiffel Tower you could hold the camera and go click. You'd have a shot that millions of other tourists have and would be good as a record of your holiday. I think at DPC you need more than that. You need to consider the POV - make it something that enhances the tower (include a flowerbed or kissing couple in the foreground), make use of lighting (dusk for shadows), composition (maybe include the buildings beside it to get a sense of scale).

I hope this helps and please don't be offended, I'm only offering an opinion.

National Geographic!
by kbhatia1967

Comment:
I see what you are doing with the border but it doesn't work for me

I Got It!!!
by t94fisher

Comment:
Nice idea but the hand in front of his face is a shame

September 12, 2001
by GeneralE

Comment:
A good idea but the blue (camera shake) ruins it