SunGlasses promotion in the middle of the crisis!
by ikopanas

Comment:
Not sure what the scene is protesting, but I like the framing color and emotion in the shot... your title on the other hand ;-)

mystic pizza
by skewsme

Comment:
Your framing of the shot is fine. The subject doesn't draw me in. Having the person somewhere else in frame, or doing something other than just standing there may help.

Passing through the city jungle
by tamatama

Comment:
The use of color and fisheye make the shot interesting. I may have framed without the person on the right leaving just the one on the left leading out the frame into the light. Normally I'd try not to have something bright like that right on the edge of the frame, but with the person walking out it, it adds interest. Just wish there was a hair more space to the left of him.

A happy protest.
by Lonz

Comment:
Drive by shooting? There is motion blur that leads me to believe this. Did you get out, talk to the men, explain your project and ask if you could hang out and take some pictures? I think if you had you'd have engaged them and gotten an image that draws the viewer in more and feel more for what they're there for. As it is, the guy on the phone doesn't make me feel for their cause. Tone, exposure, and post processing are good for this type shot.

Meetingpoint of the old people
by Zerosiz

Comment:
The subject I assume is referring to the people on the right. This composition loses them and I focus on the spilled water in the middle. Get closer, adjust your angle, get into the shot so that I can focus on what you want me to... as it is now, I have to many competing elements to find one central focal point.

On your marks
by lentil

Comment:
I know who took this! I like this shot a lot. Who wouldn't burn out getting to that bride? The square crop works great for this composition.

Business Cloister
by Zoomdak

Comment:
Aside from the edges of the images pulling my eyes away from your subject, the image is good. Try a tighter crop to remove the rough/dark areas on either side to keep the eye going toward your subject walking down the corridor.

Romance on the Wharf
by mindbottling

Comment:
Seeing the man's profile adds a lot to the image. I would bet that a color version would just as strong or stronger than the bw version. The boat and bird add to the shot and allow the eye to move around the image with the log drawing the eye back to the people sitting on it.

The dark side of childhood
by jettyimages

Comment:
Took me a second to see the smoke in her hand. Like many images in the challenge if we'd have one of the subjects looking at the camera so we could read the story in her face, it'd make for a stronger shot. A closer crop may have helped make this more engaging and a stronger shot.

the traveler
by stevieian

Comment:
Another of a long list of pictures where I feel the photographer was just walking down the street snapping random photos. Your post processing has oversharpened the image. One thing that could help is if you'd crop this as a square and frame her in the center of the shot. As it is now, the stuff on the left of the shot pulls the eye away from the person walking in front of the door.