Waiyan
by kiwiness

Comment:
It is said that 'the eyes are the window to the soul' and that 'a woman's eyes are captivating' but I have never before seen a photo capture a woman's eyes that are closed AND STILL be captivating & compelling to look at! The composition and color bear a certain individuals style on DPC and indeed you may or may not be said individual;-) Anywho, back the the photo. The colors of violet-blue and green on those eyelashes are stunning and vibrant. She 'fans' those beautiful colors and the viewer is instantly attracted to her. She is exotic not just in her culteral beauty but in those colors of the eyes. Well done.

'Moon' flowers
by MadMan2k

Comment:
The colors are bold and vibrant in these shot. The reds, oranges and golds are very warm hues and as such are more readily equated with the sun rather than the moon. It is the title that tells our eyes not to be deceived. It is the moon that illuminates this field of flowers. Given that, it influences me to think of warm October nights and the illumination of the flowers sets a tone & mood of us glimpsing an otherworldly realm - of magic, fairies, and spirits that walk the earth. The moon is full and it illuminates a magical world rarely seen. My only critique is that there are some drop-out/specks near the moon and some off to the right hand side of the sky. Those can be cloned out so as not to offer distraction.

[ R E F L E C T ]
by ericwoo

Comment:
I really like how you composed this shot. The colors are fabulous too as that they pop off the page. I find it interesting and compelling on the position of the flag - you have the strips facing down and whether it was intentional or not it does make one reflect on the 'fallen' towers and the fallen. The ones who died and the ones who laid down their lives - the fallen heroes. The fireman in the foreground makes us think of those who gave of themselves on the fateful day of 9/11 - and it doesn't have to be JUST that day but every day these public servants go out there 'to protect and to save lives'. This photo makes the viewer reflect on their contribution to the Nation. Now, I do have a critique and it is with regards to lighting. I think that you needed to cast more light on the helmet and fireman for he is a bit too much in shadow. Yes, one could say compositionally that plays well into the mood - he is in the shadow because of a pervading sadness with regards to fallen comrades. BUT with less shadows falling on his helmet and left shoulder, the fireman would be much more prominent and have an even greater impact on the photo composition because his uniform will be more visible (especially the crest on the front of the helmet which now rests in shadow and is barely visible).

Ever Feel the Odds Are Against You?
by DrAchoo

Comment:
Great title and creativity!!!! Love the set-up of the elements that make up this humorous photo. While the lighting on the fish and creativity are excellent the composition and execution of the shot needs improvement. I really think you could pull back and show us the glass so that it creates a greater impact to the title. It will show just another way that the odds are stacked against you. Next the water in the glass and the background could be clearer and brighter. The background white could be whiter and that can be accomplished through selective editing to bump up the contrast. Hmmm, maybe even play with the Brightness/Contrast tools to see if you could get the whites looking whiter rather than dingy and dull. I think just one fishing hook perfectly poised so that you can see the curve of the hook would be much better than the numerous ones you have in the composition. The reason? Simplicity sometimes is the best presentation. In my honest opinion, too many hooks is overkill on presenting your idea.
I really hope that you go back and reshoot or touch up this one for it really is a great concept.

Beauty and the Beast
by yakatme

Comment:
Took me some time to find 'Beauty' as that she is small relation to the composition as a whole. Great capture, but you need to draw us in more. A closer crop would compell us to linger longer and look at your photo. If you have a good zoom lens I would use it to get closer to the gator (don't do it physically just let your camera do it with the zoom function) I think a tight square crop just showing the portion of his head [not his snout]above water will give us all the details of the gator and the dragonfly not to mention the detail of textures both these creatures have. You want to keep the attention focused on your main subject and that is these two creatures - not the water or the negative space they are swimming in. Next, there needs to be sharper details on the skin of the gator and the dragonfly. That can be accomplished by using a smaller aperature setting (an 8 - 16 range) to get more detail and depth of field. Maybe the original has that and sometimes due to resizing some sharpness is lost - simply using sharpen or unsharp mask will take care of that. Lastly, the reflection of the cloud in the water is greatly distracting and it takes away focus from your main subjects. Changing the angle in which you shoot (low angle or high angle) or moving a few degrees to the right or left of the subject tends to get rid of unslightly elements that contribute nothing to the overall composition.

R E D
by gaurawa

Comment:
Wonderful study of a red rose. The colors are deep, vibrant, and rich. Not only does the color captivate but the folds of the petals & curves of the flower draw you in. The thin white border was a good choice for it really makes the image 'pop' off the page.

Determination
by bvoi

Comment:
Wow! What a wonderful side profile of this magnificient bird. And the composition really allows the viewer to get "up close & personal" with this bald eagle. One really gets a good look at that commanding stare and that sharp beak. I love all the details you can see in this one from the feathers to the textures on it's beak. Well done.

Concentration.
by Qiki

Comment:
What a great action shot! Love the look of concentration on the boys face as he focuses on the soccer ball. It is great how you caught the action of him running and his other leg is poised for the kick. The colors are bold and vibrant. They provide an extra 'kick' that makes the photo 'pop' off the page. The only critique is that there is the mild distraction of the standing people off in the top left corner. But I don't really see how you could have avoided this because you get what you get in action shots and the angle from which you snapped this photo is esentiall to showing the action taking place.

Freedom
by charliebaker

Comment:
Very stunning close-up of the bald eagle. Colors are bold and vibrant. Composition is excellent...love how one can see all the details in the feathers. Excellent capture.

A Day at the Races
by Shermy

Comment:
As I gaze upon this photo I cannot help but think of the film American Graffiti . The somewhat muted colors give it a nostalgic feel - which helps because the composition has some old style classic cars in it. The title of this piece is A Day at the Races and unfortunately the composition of the elements just doesn't carry it off. You don't show us much of the cars in this shot - all we are given is the top portion. Showing us more of this racer leaning against the car with the front portion, the hood, the wheels visible. We see the racer but showing more of his car will give us a better sense of who he is and what action is about to take place. Next shooting at a lower angle and a different angle (perhaps to the side of the car where the grille and headlight are seen at a diagonal) would remove all the unsightly elements that detract from the main focus of your image ( the other cars, that guy strolling by in the background, the billboard, and possiblity the telephone poles & wires).