The Old Yellow Tap
by kiwinick

Comment:
This is great .. but I would have liked the tap to hit the horizontal thirds ... vertical thirds will just have to do. 8.

Peeled off
by Arti-Elvi

Comment:
and the yellow is where?

Weed to some, flower to others
by spartacus9

Comment:
focus isn't on the flower .. too much hand really.

pINkTRUDER ALERT
by obsidian

Comment:
not only well done, but cute too. I really dont much like the angle you have cropped to ... but like most the rest.

Ramillete amarillo (Yellow bouquet)
by shamrock

Comment:
Interesting DOF.

Chromatic
by sangeeth

Comment:
hasn't really worked for me ... seems a little too much and the flower depth isn't really there.

U/A Vial
by GeneralE

Comment:
LOL .. that is a 'piss take' ....

If Arnit and Babylon had a baby...
by muckpond

Comment:
Love it .. you have so tickled by funny bone :O)

Solar Lighted Impatients
by LVE

Comment:
Kari from the critique club. I am Doing this from work Larry so please forgive the lack of my normal template.

First impression:

Interesting pic ... makes me want more of the flower and less of the background.

Composition
I feel there are issues with this is not too bad .. you have hit thirds with both flowers ... but it is the huge gap that just doesn't sit quite right.

Technical

This is a grainy picture ... I am not sure why, it sounds as if it was well lit .. but I think the ISO setting is too low for the level of light you had. Maybe adjusting this may have helped (this is a guess and an area I am still learning too). Some of your pixels appear to be very significant .. this happens in a number of different ways including when you blow up the size of a picture, or even zoom in so much that you can see every little one.

Subject:

Meets the challenge - you did say it was 2 second shutter speed :)

Moving onwards and upwards:

Not your highest scoring ... but it was I am sure an adventuresome shot. Well done on the effort and again I always look forward to seeing more of your work.

Any questions on the critique drop me a PM

Cheers
Kari

Message edited by author 2006-04-02 19:42:53.

Abstract Conception
by jaxsond

Comment:
good concept .. jsut a little much out of focus.