Nikki
by facesastheycome

Comment:
Does not meet the challenge really ... would have done well in portrait.

A Solid View
by saintaugust

Comment:
Clever .. .nice take on this.

ITCH !!! Whats a Super Model to DO??
by kiwinick

Comment:
I am surprised this deserved so much better - she is so adorable :)

Inferno
by kiwiness

Comment:
Fantastic ..awesome shot well done.

For Joy!
by AChelton

Comment:
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:

This is great .. shows true energy and zest!

Composition:
I like how you have cropped for the thirds ... if not cropped excellent shooting for composition. Background is hugely important and for this you have done well.

Subject:
More than meets the challenge.

Technical (Colour and light):
I always love natural light as the basis and then fiddling .. which it seems if what you have done. The picture looks like it may be slightly oversharpened (I think I saw artifacts around the hands and hair) ... but that is minor.

To grow its vote?:
Personally I think you did well .. no 1s or 2s ... but the need to create more immediate impact may be the issue .. I thought it was great and scored it accordingly ... but looking at those who scored around you ... you did do well.

Summary:

Lovely cool picture .. interactive and sold to me.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari

Missing you
by ShutterPug

Comment:
Awesome shot ... truley a good picture ... has all the ticks ... subject, interestintg, emotion and composition ... congrats :)

Contemplate
by joynim

Comment:
O nthe front page .. good going .. is is a lovely image... :) You scored well out of ... the vote who commented on everything too :)

Mom Cutting Cake for Soon-to-Be Bride
by fotomann_forever

Comment:
My goodness Leroy I would never ever have expected this shot from you .. it is more than a lovely image ... it is going to be part of a family historical occasion ... good luck with this project.

Treasures of the past
by sallyjo1

Comment:
This is a wonderful vase .. but the background does absolutely nothing for it ... and that it is marked detracts from the actual focus point.

The Moon: 4.5 billion years old
by s4nd3r99

Comment:
Interesting shot ... almost a little too centred.