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Challenge: Jump (Advanced Editing IV)
Camera: Nikon D70
Lens: Nikon AF-S DX Zoom-Nikkor 18-70mm f/3.5-4.5G IF-ED
Location: A park
Date: Apr 8, 2006
Aperture: f5
ISO: 200
Shutter: 1/1999
Galleries: Humorous, Candid
Date Uploaded: Apr 8, 2006

 This was a real fun shot to take. Me and a couple friends went to a park near my house and I brought my camera. I remembered the jump challenge so I asked Owen to jump off of one of the tables that were placed around the park. I angled the camera upward so that no treeline would be present. I snapped 4 pictures and then my camera ran out of batteries >:(

I uploaded them to the computer and this was the only one that "jumped" out at me ;)

Editing:

Convert From Raw
Dodge/Burn
Selective Color
Brightness/Contrast
Resize
Noise Reduction
Sharpen
Save for web

This will probably be very similar to alot of the jump pictures, so I'm not expecing a stellar score.

Thanks to Owen for jumping.

Statistics
Place: 47 out of 151
Avg (all users): 5.7812
Avg (commenters): 7.0000
Avg (participants): 5.3913
Avg (non-participants): 6.0000
Views since voting: 767
Views during voting: 335
Votes: 192
Comments: 4
Favorites: 0

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AuthorThread
 04/23/2006 11:58:00 PM
::: Critique Club :::

Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.

First Impression - the most important one:

This is great .. shows true energy and zest!

Composition:
I like how you have cropped for the thirds ... if not cropped excellent shooting for composition. Background is hugely important and for this you have done well.

Subject:
More than meets the challenge.

Technical (Colour and light):
I always love natural light as the basis and then fiddling .. which it seems if what you have done. The picture looks like it may be slightly oversharpened (I think I saw artifacts around the hands and hair) ... but that is minor.

To grow its vote?:
Personally I think you did well .. no 1s or 2s ... but the need to create more immediate impact may be the issue .. I thought it was great and scored it accordingly ... but looking at those who scored around you ... you did do well.

Summary:

Lovely cool picture .. interactive and sold to me.

If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.

Cheers

Kari
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
04/16/2006 09:27:20 PM
A wild and crazy guy with a great sky behind. Bump.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 04/11/2006 11:36:08 PM
awesome capture! 8
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 04/10/2006 06:47:09 PM
Beautiful picture young man. This is by far the best I have ever seen and if I could vote it would be a 10.
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