Camelback Road
by Alicia

Comment:
This is a really strong shot; I agree with Jack about maybe a higher crop. Those lights are giving you digital artifacts as well as messing with your composition. The sky is brilliant, I love it!

I spy... I spy...
by Alicia

Comment:
I guess I don't find this scary at all; I've had a real live view of a cat from this perspective (woke up with them sleeping near my head enough times); to me it screams of the comfort and ease of a cat's life.

Iced Tea Stirrers cropped
by Alicia

Comment:
I think this does seem a bit crowded and busy, but that's what these places are like, and that's why this is such a good shot! Excellent contrast in this shot to emphasize the starkness of places like this, where they shoehorn in a ton of bric a brac in the hopes of making it feel homey (I think that's why they do it); almost as if your eyes fell on pure space you might get up and leave without paying! Nicely shot to capture that feel.

ten/thirty
by UNCLEBRO

Comment:
Wonderful composition here, with nice tones, if not as extreme as yesterday's. The moist insides really come through. By the way, tried to add you as a fav photog but couldn't -- you were already there! Oops . . .

nine/thirty
by UNCLEBRO

Comment:
I love the minimalism here, and think it's very effective just the way you've presented it.

eleven/thirty
by UNCLEBRO

Comment:
Wonderful available light shot, with so much emotion in the eyes. I would actually like to see a bit wider crop, to the outside of the bars, so it is almost immediately apparent that he is in a cage (and hopefully why), and which might isolate him a bit more in the image. I do like it as is, though, and I definitely wouldn't crop it any tighter.

The Band Who Knew Too Much
by Retroesque

Comment:
Excellent tones and composition in this, and good use of motion blur. Really nice slice of street life here, a bit gritty even (that's not particularly fun work he's doing, and you've captured that feel, I think, from the chaotic posters on the wall to generally dirty appearance of his surroundings).

Day Nine: Succulent Gray
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
The textile look of this, as though it is on a canvas, is very appealing. I'm a bit less excited about the border and the rough edges of the image, which almost kind of a little bit sort of cancel each other out (can you tell I'm not very comfortable with my articulation of that??). Great tones and textures in the image itself, too, very nicely shot.

Day Ten: The Bar is Open
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
Excellent tones and light from an available light shot, especially a self-portrait. Nicely done. Going to get myself a beer now, but I don't have my own skull mug :(

Day 13 - Boston
by CapeSail

Comment:
No comments here? Weird. Anyway . . . this is a good shot, with some wonderful composition. I'd love to see it lightly processed, maybe straightened a bit (though that might be tough given this perspective, it might be best as is), with a boost in contrast (curves, perhaps) to give it greater impact.