unwilling model
by timfythetoo

Comment:
Good lighting. However, I would try a different crop. This one makes his head look too distorted.

Caught Red-Handed
by smyk

Comment:
Nice idea but I wished he was off-centered not so much because of rule of thirds but because it would enhance the feeling of him trying to escape.

Bottles by Flashlight
by Elaine

Comment:
Very nice lighting and composition. I like everything about it except for the noise.

The Adventures of Duck Rider™
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
Ok now we need to know the origin of Duck Rider. Can we get a glimpse from issue #1? So may questions like where did he get the cool bandanas and was his magical torch really lit by the duck's ass at Mount Vega? :P

Message edited by author 2006-06-03 16:17:52.

H O R S E L O V E R ®
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
LOL

Heater Off the Left Corner
by banmorn

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First off let me tell you I love baseball so right off the bat you have me especially since this image is so vivid in color and is super sharp! But I must find faults especially since you scored only a 5.02 which I think makes this terribly underrated, IMO.

Ok, the aspect of heat in this challenge was probably in dispute by many voters or they simply didn't understand the sports reference. In any case to help with the idea here I think you should have used a slightly slower shutter speed so you get more motion blur on the ball to convey speed. Also, like one of the commenters mentioned a swinging bat would have helped greatly. Assuming you were there for the whole game you probably could have caught an image like that. Speaking of which if you combine more motion blur and a swinging bat you would have achieved your goal of capturing that baseball heater to the max. Another good shot of this could have been a pitch inside where the hitter leans back. Obviously that's a tougher one to capture since you'd probably have to be shooting on just about every pitch to get the one like that. Anyway, just a thought.

White heat
by KHolt

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club!

First let me say this is kick ass! During the challenge I questioned why you went b/w for this challenge. Don't get me wrong, I love this image just the way it is but I figure you might want to make it more hot looking for the drive by voters. ;) Ok, enough of that and on to the critique.

Technicals:
Perfect. I am amazed at the level of detail you captured in the flame itself. It's so sharp and full of life. The translucent parts of the flame and the clarity is what makes this one sing.

Subject/composition:
Great subject captured splendidly. I also love how you composed the shot.

Improvements:
I wish I had some good suggestions here but I don't. For just the challenge I think you should have gone with a color version even if you had to add the color in post. Looking at the top ten it's even more clear to me now you shouldn't have gone b/w, which is a shame because this image is very hot as is, IMO. Congrats on a good score and even better image.

Hot Enough
by Rebecca

Comment:
Greetings from CTP2

Great idea but the image is just so cool looking in every sense of the word :) that it fails to convey "heat", IMO.

Technicals:
Strong. Not much I can critique here. Everything from the detail on the pool side to the specular higlights on the chrome rails is just perfect. Good exposure here.

Subject/composition:
A good yet challenging subject to convey heat and I think you came real close. Composition-wise this works. I love the diagonal line and the off-center egg and rails. Really everything is perfectly placed.

Suggestions for Improvement:
The only one I have is challenge specific which is make this image look more hot looking. In other words, maybe make that pavement area more reddish in color? Not super hot red but something that gives even the slightest impression that it's hot. I think if the pavement looked hot so would the egg and so would this image in general and if that was the case this is easily a 6.5 scoring image, IMO.

Jackpot!!
by Oddfrog

Comment:
Greetings from CTP2

Great idea but the execution is lacking a bit. The highlights are too harsh but more than that the ant is just not prominent enough in the frame. For an idea like this it needs to hit you square in the face and this falls short in that area. Just as a quick fix putting that ant on top would have sold the idea much faster in my opinion and probably would have automatically gotten you a higher score.

As for improving the technicals I think if you just got down even lower the highlights problem wouldn't have been an issue plus the ant would take on more of a central role in the frame itself. Another thought would be to spin the bagel around so the ant is receiving the direct sunlight and that way you would be shooting with your back to the sun, which would also help you avoid those blown highlights.

Message edited by author 2006-06-02 18:11:35.

Too-Much-edit.jpg
by Rooster

Comment:
I like the editing also. Regardless of that her expression and how she fits in this little world you've captured in this frame is what makes the photo. Great job capturing that.