Tiny Dancer
by posthumous

Comment:
Funny it does look like money and nothing like a bag of skittles. I like your composition. In fact I don't think anything else would work better, IMO. For me it makes her look more like she is up against that wall leaning on it. Despite her flashy outfit she looks shy and the composition enhances that.

Colin, can you hear me? OMG!!! Colin? Colin!!!!!!!!!!!!
by jonfrommk

Comment:
I'll critique this based on what you mentioned in the thread.

I think this could have been a great idea for double take. It fits the challenge very well and it has a story. As you mentioned the technicals aren't great and it would need to be in order to do well especially for this subject which many don't really respect unless it's done incredibly well (toys, statues are treated similar).

As Don mentioned you need context to finish this idea. If you can make it look like "Candyland" that would wow the voters even if your technicals weren't the best. Looking at your previous entries it doesn't look like that should be a problem for you.

the fourth dimension
by nixter

Comment:
Awesome. I like your title. Reminds me of Flatland in a way.

tone mapping
by krnodil

Comment:
Makes you want to see what the rest of the world looks like in this universe. I really like the way you heighten the contrast between the living and the dead old walls.

Window
by posthumous

Comment:
I miss NYC.

The Long Walk Home
by mk

Comment:

Originally posted by dsterner: hmmmm...I like the idea, but it seems too staged.

I agree. Where are the flying cows???

Elements in Harmony
by Nuzzer

Comment:
Congrats Gerry. You should circle the spot you stood and call it Ribbonsville. :P

Elemental
by jdannels

Comment:
WTG Joe! I want your polarizer.

Water of Glass
by jerowe

Comment:
Congrats on your first ribbon! I really like your editing treatment.

by daboardergirl

Comment:
Nice tones.