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| 11/23/2005 05:51:39 AM |
Rule of Fourby 84NETgalComment: Forgive me, but I find nothing even here at all.
Architecturally even?
Not really, as there is no symmetry to the photo.
That said, I'm loving the effect of the long exposure helping the reflections of light on the water right along.
Good luck with future submissions. |
| 11/23/2005 05:48:17 AM |
Ancient Calculatorby mcreminComment: The thumbnail looked much better on this pic.
In full size it lacks detail, and the highlights are "blown".
In addition it almost looks like the picture is blurry and out of focus.
Fix those things and you may just have a winner next time round! |
| 11/23/2005 05:19:39 AM |
Twin Peaksby JacksonComment: Do you know what would have done it for me?
I'll tell you.
A glorious golden/pink/purple sunset/sunrise reflected on these lofty peaks.
Or even the use of a polarising filter to help isolate them from the sky, and to add depth and drama.
I believe that a picture should really "SPEAK" to you, and for me this one is whispering right now.
But shoot it at early morning or late evening and watch her RIP!
Good luck with future entries. |
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| 11/23/2005 05:16:14 AM |
The Pyramid Of Learningby aledfcComment: So.
What we have here is a pile of books on a carpet.
15 books.
On 1 carpet.
And nothing which looks even either. (The pile is off-centre, and skew.)
I think you'd have done better by taking more time in deciding on your angles, and on using lighting to add character, and isolating the books from their background, might also have helped.
Don't give up trying.
And remember this motto:
"Is this pizzazz?
Or is this pedestrian?"
It's what helps me decide on what gets deleted and what stays.
Good luck for future entries! |
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| 11/23/2005 05:10:48 AM |
Twoby KiwiChrisComment: Nice choice of subjects to fulfill the brief.
Pity about the "stick" reflection in the green glass, and the big dark "blob" thing reflection in the blue glass.
More attention could have been paid to isolating the subjects completely from any reflective interference.
Furthermore, the colour is a bit "washed out".
Fix those things, and you'd have a winner! |
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| 11/23/2005 04:57:51 AM |
Two Liliesby elemessComment: Nice choice of subject, and it matches the brief perfectly.
However, the lillies are virtually lost in a "sea" of sameness.
There's not enough shadow-midtone-highlight or colour differentiation to make them REALLY stand out in your picture.
And then there are the foreign blotches of white on the lillies... |
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| 11/23/2005 04:50:03 AM |
6 in lineby ralphComment: Well, since there are 6 blue orbs in the picture, I guess it lives up to the brief.
But other than that, it just doesn't really speak to me.
The back orb, is there more by implication than actual involvement, for instance.
And the white light circle is off centre, with the red laser stripe also missing the top left corner, after succesfully beginning in the bottom right corner.
Those things all throw the "even-ness" of the picture out of whack. |
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| 11/17/2005 08:31:51 AM |
Ever Watchfulby JutildaComment: Something looks wrong with his nose.
I don't know why, but it just looks skew. |
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