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The Pyramid Of Learning
The Pyramid Of Learning
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Photograph Information Photographer's Comments
Challenge: Even (Basic Editing III)
Camera: Olympus C-70 / C-7000 Zoom
Location: Inside an English Classroom
Date: Nov 22, 2005
Aperture: f 2.8
ISO: 100
Shutter: 1/20
Date Uploaded: Nov 22, 2005

 This picture is sharpened and cropped. It was taken indoors in the early evening. That's all folks! Enjoy!

Statistics
Place: 138 out of 152
Avg (all users): 4.1994
Avg (commenters): 3.2222
Avg (participants): 3.8889
Avg (non-participants): 4.2929
Views since voting: 643
Views during voting: 407
Votes: 311
Comments: 9
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 Comments Made During the Challenge
11/29/2005 02:51:35 PM
Poor choice in background. Dictionaries are too centered in the frame and overall it just isn't interesting. One of the things I ask myself when voting is whether I could see the photo hanging on my wall. In this case it is a definite no.
 11/29/2005 12:37:25 AM
even stack...odd number of books...
 11/26/2005 02:05:17 PM
A creative use of an odd number of books.
 11/25/2005 05:48:14 PM
if you had left the pyramid at 1 through 4, instead of 5, would have had an even number of books
 11/24/2005 09:13:59 PM
I would have used this picture for a challenge with a pyramid theme. Otherwise, its simply a pic of a pile of dictionaries. Try using black and white with a different angle.
 11/23/2005 10:56:58 AM
Nice and sharp, but could use something more, more angle, a kid leaning on the pyramid, a pad of paper with writing, etc.
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/23/2005 05:40:51 AM
this picture should be in Odd challenge, - 15 books
 11/23/2005 05:16:14 AM
So.
What we have here is a pile of books on a carpet.
15 books.
On 1 carpet.
And nothing which looks even either. (The pile is off-centre, and skew.)
I think you'd have done better by taking more time in deciding on your angles, and on using lighting to add character, and isolating the books from their background, might also have helped.
Don't give up trying.
And remember this motto:
"Is this pizzazz?
Or is this pedestrian?"
It's what helps me decide on what gets deleted and what stays.
Good luck for future entries!
  Photographer found comment helpful.
 11/23/2005 01:51:51 AM
The texture on the ground is very distracting


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