self-2.jpg
by kevrobertson

Comment:
I like your expression in this shot and your interaction with the equipment. The lighting is off in that the large red light on the left dominates - it could be cloned out or tamed down. The white light in the upper right is distracting - again cloning out would work. The strong reflections on the upper equipment are again pulling us away from your portrait. They could be toned down. I like the red lighting on you very much. It creates a wonderful mood. You may be able to crop this to create a better balanced composition. Try taking some off the left and top. I also like the perspective on this shot. Very strong and "manly."

Thought Overgrowth
by cycomerlin14

Comment:
Sorry, I missed the connection. 3

branch
by tcmartin

Comment:
Strong tonal range usage. The composition is off for me - too centered and not enough of the actual branching. I think a slightly lower shooting angle would have given a stronger composition. I do like the hardware in the foreground. 6

Dead Branch Drifting
by Shecoya

Comment:
Beautiful piece of wood and setting. Your lake is pouring out the right side of the image or give the impression that it is. 5

Lying in the grass, next to the mausoleum.
by sump

Comment:
I find the forground very distracting. Overall the wall and tree do not provide enough focus to keep me in the picture. I do like the dreamy coloring. 3

IMG_5137
by Rikki

Comment:
You made the right choice. The lines on the other shot work much better. Also, the parking lot in the lower left of this shot doesn't enhance the shot. The small piece of green on the other shot would be overlooked (mostly) by the DPCers, but not the parking lot. I do like the foot placement on this shot. It has a very nice line. Wonderful concept. Congratulations on your strong showing.

Becky

Dusk & Labrador
by hideout

Comment:
Heidi, Congratulations. A great shot and an incredible finish. Way to share Utah.

Suspension Bridge
by friggyhoppinpot

Comment:
The focus and lighting in this shot are not very strong. I can't see the connection to dairy. Is there one? 3

1869 - The Golden Spike
by jrtodd

Comment:
Congratulations to a fellow Utahn. It's a great catch. I'll be watching your work in the future and expect I'll see wonderful images.

Patience and Granola Bars
by trnqlty

Comment:
What a nice catch and memory.