Down the Rabbit Hole
by doc_gonzo

Comment:
Nice idea, sets it apart from the stand police lineup shots poeple have entered (when they havent entered candids). This shots meets all the technicals and looks good to boot.. 7 - well done.

Core
by kellian

Comment:
Lets get the bad stuff out of the way first. I am not liking the green tint and would of liked to see the exposure upped a wee bit. However, now onto the good.

Composition is spot on, nice tight cropping has worked well here, a lot of shots in this challenge have left far too much negative space around the sides of the image.

The models are nicely posed , I take it this is a band promo shot.. so, sort out the green tint, brighten it up and bit and it would be great... giving this a 7

Kids Never Slow Down
by zefram47

Comment:
oh come on, this isnt a portrait, I would even say its candid. why did you try to squeeze this into this challenge.. you would of been better off keeping it for this months freestudy. 3

Dance
by mmusicante

Comment:
Arrgh, I bet you wish that person in the bottom left had kept their head down.. nice shot, nice movement, I would class this as candid which is good, its more `editorial` which can easily be squeezed into the portrait catagory.. not gonna knock you down for that person being in the way.. 7

Garden Wedding
by dtremain

Comment:
OK, this isnt really a portrait is it? Its a very well composed shot (I would of cropped out the brickwork at the bottom though) but to try to squeeze it into a portrait challenge is pushing it a bit far.. sorry but I am gonna DNMC you on this one... sorry :( 4

candidness
by xavcth

Comment:
not bad, maybe slightly oversaturated. this has the feel of aphoto shot on film from the 70s. A good vibe to this shot.. 6

profiles
by sigrun_th

Comment:
not sure on what has happened in the post processing stages here. Lighting isnt very nice in my opinion and the shot doesnt hold me in anyway.. 6

Teamwork
by escapetooz

Comment:
OK, now, this is good because you made it look natural although we know its posed.. so it has that candid feel, whilst still staying in the realms of portrait, and for that I award you a 8.. well done.

"Street Girls"
by RandomPlaces

Comment:
OK, I daresay this is getting its fair share of views, its an OK portrait, nothing to write home about though. Using a longer/wider lens and moving back further would of done this shot wonders.. 6

Goofballs!
by GThumbtack

Comment:
fun but ultimately uninspiring. no effort made here on what is basically a snapshot. 4