Underwear and evening sun
by gudbjargarson

Comment:
I reallt, really like the toning and the framing here, but the composition is too busy. I can understand why you wanted to keep it all in, as it is a terrific building for photographing. I think a tighter crop would have improved this one a great deal. Maybe including the arch, but loosing the botom of the shot to leave the open window and panties in the lower left corner woudl work better.

Who came home to see me?
by meyers

Comment:
Nice capture, but the focus seems to be on the wood of the window instead of the little boy. The centered composotion works for this one, but I'd straighten the tilt a bit.

Rained Out
by DrAchoo

Comment:
Ah, the rain messes up plans. Great mood conveyence with the color and expression. Still a bit too centered for my taste, but a nice capture. I think having him look the other side of the window would have improved the composition. It feels like he is looking out of the frame.

Windows
by Zenjohn

Comment:
Excellent arcitecture capture, but I am missing the window framed part. The colors are terrific and the focus is nice. The upper left portion of the building looks a little overexposed, but not enough to complain. Did you add gradient fill to those windows?

Inside looking out. Outside looking in.
by front_element

Comment:
Getting outside that window from your position would have made this one much nicer. I like the way the painter(?) has framed himself for you. Good eye.

Take a Right Here
by Cam

Comment:
Okay, whose diriving?!? This was one of the most creative shots of the challenge. I like the composition and the exposure looks perfect. I think that I would have opened up that aperature to get a more shallow depth of field to blur the ground a bit. Overall, very nice.

Elements of Reality
by karmat

Comment:
I like this capture, but I think that the vehicle reflecting draws too much attention. I also feel that the focus is more on the tree reflection at the top than the little girl. Nice toning and mood, but I think I would have moved the van. But, its not always easy to re-do toddler shots, is it?

Window magic
by max90034

Comment:
Neat idea, and great exposure. I think a tighter crop would have made this one better, getting rid of most of the top and most of the right hand side. Very well focused on the subject.

Idle Time
by landcamera

Comment:
I like this composition, and the focus is crisp. I thnk shift your position a bit would remove that brown house reflection and make this shot even better. The grass reflects nicely, but the house draws too much attention. Nice shot overall.

Window Bouquet
by glad2badad

Comment:
I think that this is a nice idea, but it just comes across too busy. Maybe raising the window lace up just a bit and cropping tighter would reduce some of the jumble. Nice focus and exposure.