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05/07/2006 12:08:44 AM |
::: Critique Club :::
Hi, my name is Kari and from the critique club.
Interesting to do a critique on your image but it is difficult if you don't give us any information in your photographers comments. When we do a critique, we go past just the photographic result, that's what voters comments do. The critique looks at what you were trying to achieve, how you wanted it to look and what issues you had in getting the image captured and ready for voting.
First Impression - the most important one:
Well done, love the framing and cropping to definately play the shot.
Composition:
hard to do a not centred shot here, nice that you have cropped to the frame and better that they hang their knickers if a single frame.
Subject:
Meets the challenge extremely well.
Technical (Colour and light):
Here i felt it may be a little overcontrasted .. but I have no idea what you were after with this shot without your comments ...
To grow its vote?:
Look at the comments you got .. this is a great shot ... every thinks something different ... not sure how to improve really.
Summary:
Great shot .. nice to at least see it on your profiles front page.
If you've got any questions about this critique, please feel free to contact me via the PM system.
Cheers
Kari |
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05/01/2006 10:49:38 AM |
| Almost entirely "frame" and a small though very striking subject. Brilliant! I gave you a 9. |
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04/30/2006 10:13:30 PM |
| Haha, how funny is that! The house looks abandoned and there are UNDERWEAR haning in the window :) Great catch, got a 7 from me. |
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04/30/2006 05:52:36 PM |
| LOL.. good subject, framed by window, i just wish there was another point of interest in the photo |
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04/30/2006 04:31:59 PM |
| great texture and tone. funny subject. great juxtaposition. |
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04/30/2006 09:48:01 AM |
| I'm not sure what to say - humorous, but not very interesting. |
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04/29/2006 11:09:51 PM |
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04/29/2006 08:53:27 PM |
| Great picture - one of my favorites |
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04/29/2006 08:24:24 PM |
| Selected works, maybe a litle closer would have been better |
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04/29/2006 06:17:02 PM |
| The lack of absolute symmetry bothers me here... if you're going to make a symmetrical composition, make it perfect! Interesting shadows and light, underwear is too small to make for an interesting composition. |
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04/29/2006 01:13:56 PM |
| I reallt, really like the toning and the framing here, but the composition is too busy. I can understand why you wanted to keep it all in, as it is a terrific building for photographing. I think a tighter crop would have improved this one a great deal. Maybe including the arch, but loosing the botom of the shot to leave the open window and panties in the lower left corner woudl work better. |
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04/29/2006 11:06:17 AM |
| This looks outstanding! What an amazing old window. The red/white underwear adds a different dimension to the shot - something interesting. Good luck. 8 |
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04/29/2006 07:24:12 AM |
| I like it a lot. Good composition, nice finding and use of colours. I like the post-editing |
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04/29/2006 04:12:42 AM |
| A great shot of what was once a very grand window. The underwear is a perfect contrast. |
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04/28/2006 10:02:09 PM |
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04/28/2006 05:40:26 PM |
| very funny. hope this ends up on the front page of dpc :) |
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04/27/2006 04:35:19 PM |
This must get a ribbon! Love the detail and textures, made me smile.
As it was advanced editing perhaps could have cloned out the cable on this right...
8 |
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04/27/2006 04:13:31 PM |
| Great idea, but the pattern of squares on the bottoms draws the focus away from the underwear. |
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04/27/2006 09:18:31 AM |
| An interesting image. I like the clarity. |
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04/27/2006 06:25:22 AM |
| this is fantastic...hope it does well for you |
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04/26/2006 03:27:29 PM |
| this one made me smile :) I'm not really fond about the framing of your photo, I think I might have made a square crop. (just the wood part of the building, withoud the pillars & balcony around). 7 |
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04/26/2006 03:15:52 PM |
| Great, great shot, but honestly I'm not too big a fan of the subject matter. Just seems oddly out of place. |
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04/25/2006 10:13:21 PM |
| funny, the shadow on the left bothers me just a little. still a 7 |
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04/25/2006 08:18:57 PM |
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04/24/2006 11:29:41 AM |
| Excellent image and title! |
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04/24/2006 10:49:31 AM |
| Wonderful lighting. Fun capture. |
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04/24/2006 06:17:31 AM |
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