Balcony Lounging
by annah

Comment:
Would be better if the sky weren't blown out and if she had a head. Good concept, but perhaps another angle or another crop would have worked better.

Accessor'eyes'
by -Bec-

Comment:
Would like this much better if she were looking at the camera. And smiling.

Strike a pose
by srdanz

Comment:
This is a very cute, very harshly lit picture. I think a little softer light would be much more flattering to her.

School Fashion
by mferg265

Comment:
Not sure I like this pose for this subject - seems too 'adult' to me. Also, the black boots get lost in the flooring. Bringing the lighter background down onto the floor and then up behind the subject would cure that. Love the outfit and the 'attitude', though, and aside from the pose (and wrinkled background) I could envision this in a children's fashion spread.

bebe in black and blue
by lagavulin

Comment:
Classic 'model' pose, beautiful skin tones, nice concept. Maybe add a hair light to separate her hair from the background a little more. Otherwise the lighting is really nice.

Nadine
by gloda

Comment:
Had you waited a second or two more and shot this without the people in the background, this would have scored much higher with me. Love the concept, love the rich colors, and I love her 'attitude'. Not too sure about the tilt, but since I can see that it was intentional, I'll not mark it down simply because it doesn't really appeal to me. The onlookers in the background, though, are a major distraction.

Allure Earings . . . The Latest Mardi Gras Fashion
by PhotoRyno

Comment:
Ouch! Hate to catch a fish while wearing some of those! :)
Very original concept. Love the bright colors and composition.

Welcome back
by jatcom

Comment:
Interesting concept. The whiteness of the background seems to be competing with the subject, though, and the subject himself seems a little washed out.

No Tie Required
by jenesis

Comment:
the whole pic seems to tilt downhill a little to the right. Love the lighting and the pose, though.

Low Rise
by Keith Maniac

Comment:
Excellent shot. Lighting, composition, skin tones, colors, pose - everything works nicely together. Love it.