We have lift off
by train

Comment:
I'd crop off a lot of the bottom. You'd still have the bee off-center, and IMHO, the picture would have more impact.

Wistful
by kari1

Comment:
I'd have cropped it to get rid of a lot of the white tables which aren't very interesting. You'd still have had a good picture with the subjec off-center.

Someone Is Coming
by Wayne1492

Comment:
Good capture of the two children, but they need to be sharper.

Morning Coffee
by linda12201

Comment:
Good picture, but it needs to be bigger. It could use some light on the man's figure -- just enough to give it some more definition.

Technically, i guess this is off center, but it doesn't really give that impression. The fire is what draws our eye, and it is balanced by the coffee pot and the man's figure. The total impression, with the square format, is a centered picture.

Framed
by marvin

Comment:
This looks too awkward.

Comfort zone
by nico_blue

Comment:
I really wish you hadn't cut the top of his head off.

Out number Choco
by boyetv

Comment:
Good idea, but you need better focus.

Simplicity Askew
by L1

Comment:
Nice portrait of the child, but the tilt is too contrived.

Lift
by justin_hewlett

Comment:
Hard to pick the subject out of the background.

What?
by henry_buckle

Comment:
Good candid. Good use of b&w.