Noriline : Anti Depressants save your life....
by amateurboi

Comment:
I guess I see what your going for here but I don't know if its effective. Without the title I'd have no clue what the product is.

For Sale
by bobgaither

Comment:
A funny play on the theme description. Original way to add text to the phot in basic.

Nixon
by nephoto

Comment:
Pretty model and great lighting. I lke the fashion approach to this. However I think you could've used a tighter crop that would've presented the product more prominantly and achieved the same effect. (Just my humble opinion)

Amouage - The Essence of Arabia
by inshaala

Comment:
Comp lends itself well to text placement. I 'm sure what's being sold as the product is prominantly displayed. I would've not left the bottle tilted.

Cascade: a smooth and refreshing drop.
by Stagolee

Comment:
I like this. I think you could crop this tighter to put more emphasis on the product. But your set up really gives a "refreshing" feel to it. Excellent work

Colors: Utrecht Art Supplies
by banmorn

Comment:
Interesting shapes, lines and colors. Lighting and technicals are good but I'm not really sure what you're selling without the title. Maybe a bit too abstract to be effective.

Feather-like
by sekarmalathy

Comment:
Great lighting and product presentation. I'm sure what's being sold and the comp lends well to text possibilities. Very professional.

That "Special" Umbrella: Every DPC member needs one!
by tate

Comment:
Great comp. It would be easy to place text into this. Birds are a distraction but in the real world they'd be cloned out. My only thought is that this would need text to explain what's being sold, otherwise I'm not sure what the product is. I do see possible cool funny type ad potential with this photo. That's probably the most important thing. Nice work.

Musical Enjoyment
by taylorpage

Comment:
Great lighting and comp. Text could be easily placed. However,I'm not sure what the product is here.

Don't !
by Prime_Time

Comment:
I really had to look at this to get it. An ad should blast its message at me. Especially one as important as this. I think a deeper DOF would've had more impact.