Bite the Sky
by dsidwell

Comment:
Sorry, but I don't know what this is.

The Market Man
by sherpet

Comment:
I think this would have been better without so much tilt. The brim of the hat would still add the diagonal.

Just like mom
by BrennanOB

Comment:
Nice, I think tighter crop would be interesting.

ripples
by Mark

Comment:
Is this a glass bowl? Pretty cool abstract.

W i n t e r b e r r y
by CalliopeKel

Comment:
I really like the feel of this. Nice bokeh, color, and lighting. It all sets the mood.

Curls
by naomik

Comment:
This has a lot of potential. On my monitor it is a tad over sharpened especially in the eyelashes of the right eye. Maybe because I have been looking at so many exaggerated diagonals, there is not enough in this. The bridge of the nose, which is the lightest portion of the face, is vertical. A slight tilt either way to get it diagonal might make the whole thing pop. If this was cropped out of a larger, there might be room to try it. Great expression on the model! (Still give it a 6, which is high for me.)

wine
by pogomcl

Comment:
Good idea, but the lighting is very subject unfriendly. The curtain in the back is too bright almost making it the subject. If you had put it on a continuous sheet of white paper and lit it from the lower left, the shadows could have created your diagonals, and the subject would have been lit. This can all be done with the window lighting. You don't need artificial.

Goose Whisperer
by aberration

Comment:
I am not sure if the diagonal line is dominant enough in this. It doesn't jump out at me.

Daydreams
by daveuf

Comment:
This is way oversharpened for my taste.

The Crossing of Sky
by abunn1

Comment:
Nice shot, but dark. Needs better lighting. The sky drowns out the subject.