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12/03/2006 02:41:54 PM |
| I think the idea is good here, the reflection in the glass of wine is intriguing. I am not sure what the apple has to do with the wine, and the picture doesn't make it clear. I think, for the image to work better, it would be best to not have such a busy background (both the tablecloth and the courtain), it's too much to absorb, and it really takes away from the best part of the image, which is the reflection in the glass of wine. ~6 |
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12/01/2006 10:30:52 PM |
| Good idea, but the lighting is very subject unfriendly. The curtain in the back is too bright almost making it the subject. If you had put it on a continuous sheet of white paper and lit it from the lower left, the shadows could have created your diagonals, and the subject would have been lit. This can all be done with the window lighting. You don't need artificial. |
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12/01/2006 03:32:44 PM |
| It is too busy for me, I think the background and table cloth distract from the subject. Speaking of the subject, there is just not enough definition to it. |
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12/01/2006 12:19:54 PM |
| lacks of contrast, lighting is flat, different decors take away form the main subjects. try single colored cloth next time |
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12/01/2006 08:23:02 AM |
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11/30/2006 07:36:25 PM |
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11/29/2006 04:15:18 PM |
| While there are some lines in the placemat that go diagonally, the main lines in the composition (glass, curtains) are all strongly vertical. Also, all of the light comes from the back, and it looks like the apple is sitting in the dark. |
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11/29/2006 10:29:37 AM |
| Background way too busy; lighting too dim on the apple; no really strong diagonals. Sorry. |
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11/29/2006 05:41:39 AM |
| not fit with the challenge |
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11/29/2006 02:38:52 AM |
| A bit unsharp, have you tried USM |
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11/29/2006 01:29:17 AM |
| I am not sure this is a diagonal composition |
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