Sad News
by whatdewuc

Comment:
A pity you didn't have critical focus on this. Use of sharpening filter is too obvious and not especially effective anyway in this case. A very evocative moment.

Slow Business
by Jovi

Comment:
Nice! I'd rate it higher if it were crisper. A solid image, a strong score.

Business
by jjbeguin

Comment:
Very strong environmental candid. Would benefit from a more muted, softer tonal range and more sparing use of the sharpening filters, I think. There's lots going on, lots of stories to read. Good work!

Hey, look!
by arpita

Comment:
This is like a "Bingo!" picture. Selective desaturation works here because it's natural-feeling.

Old lady
by sahko

Comment:
Wonderful compositiona nd expression, marred somewhat by less-than-critical visual acuity and a tad too much contrast.

Will it fit?
by vasilkovaya

Comment:
Very nice. I'd think about brushing out the random highlights between the two figures on right. These are just tiny distractions. More critically, the very bright highlights on her hair are pulling the eye the wrong way; we really want our focus drawn to the hand holding the piece. I'd tone those way down, to visually contain the drama of the action.

Local Food
by yael27

Comment:
Lovely. I wish we had a bit more on the top, that's a pretty tight fit there.

Pastiche
by zeuszen

Comment:
Simply striking. Be even more so if his (her?) hair separated a tad better from BG. I'd have toned down the chain (?) in the center bottom a couple stops too, it's an eyetrap.

Practise
by leaf

Comment:
Rich and evocative, beautifully composed. Separation of hair from BG on left is fantastic. Perhaps use healing brush to mute the nose higlights slightly? Very strong image.

Fairground Ride
by BobsterLobster

Comment:
Extraordinary overall impact. I wish more work had been done to separate the figures a tad from their dark surrounds. If we could just SZEE his arms where they cross the seat bolsters, the hands would be a much stronger element.