Just a Flash in the Pan
by talmy

Comment:
Id this were a single light source, with the light INSIDE the pan, how can the pan be throwing a shadow?

Gentle Green
by tonyv

Comment:
This is a very gentle green, indeed. The image itself is extremely appealing, sich and gauzy and soothing. But the overlaying of the triptych seems to me very much at war with the image itself. What I find especially odd is that the three panels are NOT the same size, so clearly you were putting thought into exactly where the panels should break.

In other words, you consciously used the rightmost panel-break to split the raised stem of the leaf. And I don't know why you made that choice. I am presuming you had a very specific reason to do it, but it seems to me to be the wrong choice here. I'd be interested in hearing why you did it this way, what you were after. Feel free to PM me if you wish.

Names Without Faces
by JPR

Comment:
I have come back to this one. It is very strong. Powerful and graphic, good strong weight to it visually. Bumping you up a notch.

Life Passing
by muur88

Comment:
This is in many ways one of the more interesting triptychs, conceptually, in this challenge. There's a palpable sense of immediacy, of the passage of time and life. Technically it [i]appears[/i ]flawed, with the bright vertical haloing on the right edges, and the tiny, disheveled wedge of gutter showing in each image is oddly attention-getting, but overall this leaves a certain gritty, homespun texture to the whole that's appealing to me. Bumping up, and good luck!

Golden Gate
by bryanbrazil

Comment:
Lovely iamge, but it doesn't ft comfortably into the format for me. The divisions seem quite arbitrary to me.

Reviewing this, I find myself wondering how it would work if the panels were of ascending size from left to right, so both towers were in the right-most panel, and the leftmost panel were narrower than the central panel. I donno. Regardless, it's a lovely rendering, very serene, and I am bumping it up a notch. Good luck!

Another day in Paradise
by Jean

Comment:
A finely-balanced image with a great deal of emotive content, one of my high scorers. I'm not quite comfortable with the balance of the white space here, but I am trying to view them as I suspect you intended me too, as 4 panels floating borderless and unframed on a white wall.

Bumping on review. Good luck!

Aerial Ballet
by Riponlady

Comment:
This is beautifully rendered. I'm vaguely uneasy about the overall greenish-cyan cast, but I'm sure it was a conscious decision on your part. There's nevertheless a sense that the dominant cyans don't quite match int he 3 panels, and this is bothering me a little. Good luck with this entry; I believe you'll do very well.

Nature
by aussie

Comment:
It takes a certain amount of bravery to repeat the same image, without variation, in all three panels of a triptych, in here at least :-) Based on comments my entry is receiving I suspect you're seeing some downgrading for this. Nevertheless, if any image can support that treatment, this one can. It is surprisingly complex, and somehow the double repetition forces a closer study of the singular, repeated image, paying dividends in greater appreciation of the thing itself. So I like this very much.

Creation: Day Four
by SJCarter

Comment:
I cannot believe this scored so low. Powerful image, well-made.

Dramatic Lighting
by dr3amz

Comment:
challenge requires artifical light source