Colorful view
by Melethia

Comment:
This is perfectly composed! The subdivisions of the window are placed so well that it seems like an intentional triptych.

Library daydreams
by quiet_observation

Comment:
Ha, I guess I'm going to lie around on campus lawns as well after next September. Your point of view is cool, it seems that somebody has to study in the library but would rather be outside with the others. Maybe you could have drawn some more attention on the man in the centre by burning the grass around him.

Souvenirs
by pacpinto

Comment:
If you decide to shoot a rather flat surface, you should make sure your point of view is exactly opposite the center of your frame. In your photograph the slight tilt (you stood on the left and shot up from below the window) creates a distracting distortion. Apart from that, a nice image which plays on the duality of words - you took a souvenir of souvenirs. That's why, IMO, it would have worked better as a B&W image.

A Beautiful View
by idnic

Comment:
This is a nice concept. The placement of the window seems unfortunate though. The middle cross is cutting her head off the body. Also, it seems as if the window was pinning the woman against the background, it is too close. Maybe this effect could have been prevented by her holding the frame with her hands.

Enjoying the view
by Judi

Comment:
Funny image, I hope the 'model' was aware of you taking this photograph and agreed to it, otherwise, this is a rather dramatic violation of privacy. Anyway, the title reflects the duality of the point of view (something quite difficult to achieve) well. The only thing which bothers me is the one bar which goes through his head.

Heartache
by Elvis_L

Comment:
This image as such is not really good: it is very busy and overwhelms the viewer with too many distracting details. An easy way to improve this photograph tremendously would be to include a person in it - somebody looking at the viewer through the window panes and drawing the attention on him- or herself.

distortion
by Drummie

Comment:
If you decide to submit a more or less abstract image to a photography challenge, you should make sure there is a point of focus, a certain point in the image the viewer can fix his gaze on. Also, your photograph seems to lack graphic quality, it looks as if it had been enlarged from a smaller image.

Cafe Society
by e301

Comment:
You captured this moment really well. For a candid, I'd say you should have tried to get a straighter angle through the window to give a better perspective on the women. For this challenge however, the angle works well ibecause it draws attention on the window.

the spy
by gaston

Comment:
You found an amazing location for this challenge. It is most fitting. I think it would have worked a bit better if the model was not as close to the front wall. I like that you are showing only half of him though. The tilted frames add nicely to the dynamism of the leading lines.

The Flower Shoppe
by Elaine

Comment:
It was a good decision to use selective desaturation for this photograph. The flowers might not have come out well enough otherwise. You might have desaturated the plants in the upper part of the window as well though, since they're not something you'd want attention to be drawn on.