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| 06/08/2006 01:11:35 PM |
I want to hold your hand...by BadgerComment: ==Greetings from the Critique Club==
Composition
You've used the rule of thirds well, and the lines leading from left to right are very nice. Cutting off both hands in mid-forearm is a little bit distracting, for me, though.
Camera Technicals
The exposure is basically good, but the high contrast leaves it feeling like the hands are out in space.
Post Processing
I think I would have chosen to emphasize some colors, rather than going for the true black and white looks, to show some of the "cheer" that is in the song.
Challenge
Without a question this meets the challenge very well, and it wouldn't even require the title for me to know that.
Overall Impression
The hands seem a bit disconnected from EVERYTHING, and that doesn't work really well for me. The song you picked is a "happy" song, and I think the picture is a little "sad". It's technically well done, and I like the bracelet, but it could probably be stronger with some happy colors and cheerful things.
These are just my thoughts and impressions. I hope you find them to be helpful and constructive. Please contact me by PM if you have questions or responses. |
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| 06/07/2006 11:13:52 PM |
'Til I'm Blue in the Faceby nards656Comment: Just for clarity in the world... :)
This WAS a bounced flash, I was just very close to the camera and that's why the dark eyes.
Thanks for the feedback! Very much appreciated. |
| 06/07/2006 11:05:10 PM |
Woody Presleyby tngrndreamComment: ==Trading Post==
Congratulations on a new personal best! That's always a neat accomplishment.
I like the woody - and a lot of other folks do to. The lighting on him is a touch harsh - gentling that would go a long ways and be worth at least one point from me.
Your composition is excellent. Inclusion of the shadow is also very appropriate. I think I would like to see the texture that is in the shadow area extend outward just a little more, but that might kill the shot too.
As always, just my thoughts. Keep up the good work.
EDIT TO ADD - ISO was too high, I agree. |
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| 06/07/2006 11:01:40 PM |
A Glass of Wine with a Bottle to Goby chaliceComment: ==Trading Post==
I really like this compositions and the colors, even though the red is a little too "dense", whatever I mean by that! I like the sparkle on the glass.
The black is almost too black. I would like to see some shine and more of a reflection from the bottle. For some reason the black has a really "processed" appearance.
I really dig the texture in the wineglass. |
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| 06/07/2006 10:37:39 PM |
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| 06/07/2006 10:10:10 PM |
total successby DanSigComment: ==Trading Post==
I love the negative space. It does intrigue me that she's looking OUT of the picture and it comes across this well. A good example of breaking rules and it working well.
The lighting - obviously out of your control - IS a bit harsh :)
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| 06/07/2006 09:31:19 PM |
"Crying, Waiting, Hoping"by MelethiaComment: ==Trading Post==
Trying to catch up from being so far behind...
Wow, no 1s. That's an accomplishment. That's an amazing capture, and the pure "difficulty" factor garnered you a lot of high votes. Your photography has come a LONG ways recently. The composition here is strong, even though I don't think I would have cropped it quite this way. |
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