Pucker Up!
by markmulkerin

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique club.

I think you have come up with an excellent idea for this challenge but the execution has let you down a little.

The overall impression I get when first viewing this is that it is a little harsh in lighting and could have been a bit sharper to give better clarity. The composition is OK but I feel that the seed? on the bottom is very distracting this could have been cropped out to give a better composition.

As a general rule macro/close ups need to be sharp as possible so the detail can enhance the image perhaps a faster shutter speed would have helped here. Without the detail the other thing the image suffers from is no focal point my eye wonders but has nothing to be drawn to or hold it besides that black seed.

On a positive note you have great colour and a very clever idea but just needed a little more punch to score higher. I wish you luck in future challenges and a Merry Christmas.

Cheers

Tim Sturt

Fore Bitten Fruit
by Node

Comment:
O.......... MY................ GOD. very very funny this has to be ribbon for one very confused person, Excellent work.

Flirtaceous (Color Studio Portrait)
by GolferDDS

Comment:
You ae a very funny person to create this. The resemblance is so uncanny ! ! this should be a ribbon well done.

Ouch, no serviceable parts inside!
by graphicfunk

Comment:
Congratulations Daniel a real graphic and funky image.

"To God there is no zero"
by grainman9

Comment:
Edit:

Message edited by author 2005-10-05 23:38:43.

I'll be free...
by TedvandenBergh

Comment:
Love the sky in the eye this is a great take on the eye shot. well done.

Untitled
by Kanntara

Comment:
Just a little more DOF would have made this so much better but I do like it. Would have been fantastic for the implied lines challenge.

Mixed up Monstrous Musical Melody Monsoon
by ssodell

Comment:
John Mayer, The Doors, Nivana, Eric Clapton, Bob Dylan, Fleetwood Mac, Now that is MUSIC. Well done 9

Munching a Mushroom
by hughletheren

Comment:
Good capture with nice lighting. It just needed to be a little sharper around the eye.

Bryce Canyon, Utah
by RHoldenSr

Comment:
Nature at its best, could have been a scene from Lord of the rings. well done.