"Going for a Spin"
by sfarrell23

Comment:
i'm really not sure what i'm looking at and i can't decide if that's a good or a bad thing.

Tee Time
by Krozar

Comment:
harsh lighting, but great concept.

Mayday ! Mayday !
by taterbug

Comment:
**critique club**

great shot, especially considering the camera :D

this has great lines and really good color to it. i would suggest adding another light from underneath and behind to further define the thickness of the guitar. right now it seems to blend into the background and looks almost fake-thin.

i'm sure the graphics on the guitar are cool, from this angle they do kind of distract. while the colors are great, the darker splotches detract from the photo overall.

finally, the backdrop should either be more prominent or removed. the blue ghosting in the background is almost enough to be distracting.

Line of the ring
by Fyzarl

Comment:
**critique club**

great job on this shot. a macro AND a leading line to boot.

this photo has a very appealing composition to it. coloring is great (although a true black and white with some more contrast and, perhaps, noise would be fun to see too).

other than trying some different color variations, i don't know what else i can do to help you improve upon this. it's really well-done.

Where will the rails meet the wires?
by redpanda

Comment:
**Critique Club**

color in this shot is quite good. the yellow platform complements the blue and green nicely. however, i have to agree with what many of the other commenters have said: there are almost TOO many lines here to define which are supposed to be the focus.

"leading lines" are supposed to either draw you into the photo or draw your attention to look at something. this photo suffers from too many conflicting lines and doesn't lead the viewer anywhere. without the title, there wouldn't be much of a subject at all.

DOT
by Fyzarl

Comment:
beautiful. great shot.

perfect rose
by mandyturner

Comment:
seems out of focus

Yellow Brick Road
by DeniseBernadette

Comment:
nice idea. color could be brighter.

Moo
by whiteroom

Comment:
this is beautiful and so very well colored

Refreshment
by TroyMosley

Comment:
it kind of looks like a stick of butter in a glass of 7-up. what's refreshing about that? LOL