Daphney
by bravo six

Comment:
Very nice, great colors. Beautiful model and outfit. But something doesn't quite jibe with me right.

I think it's two factors.
a) Hide areola. She's extremely well endowed but it almost becomes a distracting element. Minimize them being the biggest draw. Sure, present them...but present her as a whole.

b)something is slightly off for me regarding the face and lips. I am pin-pointing it down to a little ridge on the upper noise. It distracts from the perfection of her face. Not really a flaw but it creates a slightly off angle. I think her lips being in a narrow pursed position make for a thin feel to her feature but her face is not narrow. Makes me feel like something is off on the perspective. . You can see a slight line from the nose to the lips. Furthers this narrow facial feature feel. (Not sure if you can see what I am describing.) It's very very minor. But it makes me notice it all. I think a little PS editing can compensate. Also, I don't like the lavender makeup under her eyebrows. It adds a color only seen there and it clashes with the rest of the chosen color palette.

That said, excellent take. I was very critical but it's because you're shot is quite up there and needs the very finest detail to push your photography to that pinnacle.

;)

(8)

Le Femme Noir
by irakly

Comment:
Very classy and edgy

a lot of noice, but it's more passible in this shot due to subject

Modo
by tjmueller

Comment:
I really don't like this look. And the model's pose furthers my dis-interest (why she died her hair to such an unnatural and distracting color is beyond me).

Her hand looks large and muscular and looks to be pushing her face off. There is way too much make up and the coloring is all off.

The background is distracting as it changes right in the middle.

eh....

Too many elements just rub me the wrong way with this. And yet everything says potential setup for an excellent photo.

Red Gloss..
by Cantaloop

Comment:
Composition is nice on this shot. I like the model's poise, expression, beauty...

Colors are DRASTICALLY off...

Curves
by imagesloyola

Comment:
this almost doesn't work, it is just a touch too soft and loses a point or so for it. Still outstounding composition (7), very close to 8 and the potential to have been a 9.

Hot Fashion Plate
by IndigoButterfly

Comment:
cute

No Tie Required
by jenesis

Comment:
great shot...I really like the pose and arrangement of garments. The boots are very nice and the sharp transition of the fishnets, which create a nice moire effect to the eyes. They then sensually draw in an arch fashion right to between the model's legs. But the use of the white button down abruptly covers with a tone of innoncence. Had the area just been exposure of undergarments it would lose a touch of innoncence and art that this photo has managed to capture nicely. The couch, garments, dark hair all give a good monochromatic feel.

My one issue is the pose/expression of the face. I don't feel it supports the shot well. It looks bothered, even angry. A longing pose, questioning expresion, a soft smile, almost anything would have been more complimenting of this photo's other assets. It is a wonderful shot, beautiful model. I think there may be too much tile in the forground. Remove 1/2 an inch.

(9)

Gaze
by stare_at_the_sun

Comment:
Very nice....soft feel but well done. Interesting angle. I like this a lot...gorgeous model to boot

Wrapped in glowing lust
by shadeeua

Comment:
cool.......

Anna Lora
by sabphoto

Comment:
color balance issues....is her face really that red?