Kyndall
by Flash

Comment:
The scene is superb with a lot of potential. From a proportion point of view there should be more separation of the models. Great choice of placement for the composition. Lighting seems a bit flat.

Bigger is better?
by evenendresen

Comment:
Colors are very nice but composition is hard to read.

Copper Tops
by Beerme425

Comment:
Composition, lighting, exposure, and choice of backgroud are near perfect. Proportion and artistic interest are weak. Keep trying - it has great potential.

Proper Proportions
by dixonp1

Comment:
Colors are nice and work well together. But that's it - not a great attempt at meeeting the challenge.

First and last steps
by Bidule

Comment:
The image is dynamic. Great black and white rendition. But - just when you get into the subjects you realize the title is "first and last steps" - and it's a real letdown. Is the owner of the large shoes about to take his last step? If that's what you intended... it works. But I'd prefer something more like "Grandpa helped me tie my laces..." This is one of the very few images where the title had such an impact on me.

"Size Doesn't Matter"
by tfarrell23

Comment:
Nice idea and nice rendering.

Bricks
by GolferDDS

Comment:
Very nice "pattern shot" - great colors. Not sure I can see any proportion....

looking back
by gisele

Comment:
A vry unusual portrait - interesting.

Go easy on the lingonberrys
by MotoCycleBoi

Comment:
Hmm. A different, but effective take on "proportion" - very nice idea. My biggest problem is with your lighting - try it again - emphasize the red and reduce the bright spots.

Out of Proportion Portion
by neilmwilson

Comment:
Very nice idea. Maybe a shot a bit too much from the bottom - but not much.