She's got the devil in her heart...but her eyes they tantalize ; )
by jerowe

Comment:
Greetings from the Critique Club.

Hi Jon,

First impressions are ...I really like this shot. The colours and lighting on your beautiful model are lovely, her pose has a wonderfully fluid and sensual feel to it. Point of view, perspective appeals to me...fits the music.

I do agree with some of your comments about the busy b/g, meter next to her knees being distracting.....I wonder if a shallower dof, background oof would have thrown the focus directly onto her eyes.

I think I might have tried a further slight levels adjustment moving the white slider to 0/1.0/222, it seems to bring out more detail in her eyes and face. Good work on the composition of this shot.....it really is different, vibrant!

I grew up with the Beetles too....this shot really does fit the challenge very well, fits the mood of the time.

I'll look forward to seeing more of your work in forthcoming challenges

sue

18 Seconds Before Sunset
by Joey Lawrence

Comment:
Quite brilliant Joey! Superb colours and lighting.

To me it captures the feeling that death is just another part of life.....when we die the spirit is set free, leaving just the mortal remains.

Ya see, that's why this is such a great shot.....it makes us think, makes us feel...it moves us.

Failure To Connect
by lectrol

Comment:
Superb shot!!! Congrats on your very well deserved ribbon!

bianca32a.jpg
by librodo

Comment:
Gorgeously grungy!! Good work Manny!!

bianca30.jpg
by librodo

Comment:
Beautiful composition....I love the soft feel of this shot.

Audience
by Cutter

Comment:
Very cool shot!!

ClarkHeathWedding
by idnic

Comment:
Beautiful shot!! Can see why you fell in love with it....they will too!!

Agree with the others about cropping the sky.

The Adventures of Duck Rider™
by Art Roflmao

Comment:
Wanna complain.....Issue#15 didn't arrive in the mail!! I wanna refund!

ROFL....you are so good at this stuff!!

Mature-Woman Magazine
by Jutilda

Comment:
ROFLMAO.......I'd subscribe to this one!!

The Polydactyl Cat I
by soup

Comment:
This one's gotta be my fav ....you've captured his bad-ass attitude, the toes ..... everything! Superb!!!