Standing Apart From Another
by rjkstesch

Comment:
This is an unusual wedding portrait. They look like they don't really belong there.The light doesn't showcase her face at all. It doesn't have a very romantic sense, as the couple doesn't seem "connected" and he's looking off into the distance. If it were just him alone, leaning on the post, with that far away look, I think I would like it. The colors seem a bit distracting and busy with the various textures of the column and the shiny metallic gold up by his head. It would make an interresting study by itself without humans in the shot. A high contrast black and white might work better. If he were looking into the camera and she were leaning back into him, it might evoke more sense of solidarity yet not be the typical cheesy wedding shot.

I make the train starting
by mannjudit

Comment:
The colors of this work well together, but the overall shot just looks like a quick snapshot. It doesn't have the artistic feel of a true high ranked photograph. The guy with the blue shirt sitting inside the train is a distraction. It might be fun to have the boy inside the engine house as if he's "in charge." to get the sense of the title. The perspective would work better if you were down on his level, so that your "eye" is where his would look.

Pride for my Country
by amyrh

Comment:
This has a snap shot feel to it. I like the clarity, the darling expression and the smooth skin tones, but in order for this to have a truly artful feel, it needs more thoughtful placement. The crop is tight and I think it would be much more effective if he were standing on a stage at his school, or perhaps outside, with more negative space and good DOF. Just some suggestions. The subject matter is really appealing - just needs better execution.

Proud Father
by holyfam

Comment:
This is a cute picture, but it seems out of focus and overexposed. I'd like to see more texture, light and shadow variance on the boy's face. Tack sharp focus is essential for an effective portrait (and any photo for that matter). Maybe work on lighting so it's not so harsh. Or do it outside with early morning or late evening light. The crop is good and the crab adds a nice "boy" touch to it.

Plockton Bay
by gemeit

Comment:
I like the metallic sense of the water. The single larger boat evokes a lonely sense. The lighting is beautiful. I love the misty low lying clouds in the background. The reflection of the masts is really awesome, as they are so long, they almost help divide the picture into segments.

Memories
by Dax-

Comment:
I love post editing like this. I am hoping we'll be able to have a challenge using such tools with a "no holes barred approach."

I like the image and the nostalgic sense that it evokes. Looks just like a post card!

Passionate Love
by smilebig4me1x

Comment:
WOW - what a stunner. Love the water droplets and detail of the flower. It's what you do best. ;~D

Autum Leaf
by dr3amz

Comment:
I really like this. The crop at the top may be a tad too tight. The rich colors and detail of the leaf are showcased well here.

Grunge Hoser eh
by kendall6

Comment:
Duuuuude!!!!!

A Dog Named Bear
by ngef

Comment:
The lighting on this is just outstanding. I love profile portraits too. Great DOF! This is perfect in every way. You'll get no critique from me.