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| 10/07/2005 12:01:51 PM |
Thinking Of Youby beautyqn25Comment: Greetings from the Critique Club
The silk rose on a pink background is certainly an appropriate subject for a Greeting Card.
I have a couple of suggestions for this image. First, the pink shade you chose (imo) is just a touch strong; you might try muting it. Also, if the rose was further away from the background, you would stand a better chance of eliminating the shadows. Then, compositionally, if the rose was placed more to the left of the frame it would keep the viewer in the picture longer.
Finally, my camera club judges always stress the importance of "border patrol." That would take care of that partial leaf in the lower section of the image. (I always seem to see that stuff after the image has been submitted.)
I wish you the best of luck in future Challenges!
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| 10/07/2005 11:45:40 AM |
Baseballby hstegComment: Great shot of a baseball. Unfortunately for me, I can't for the life of me, find the connection with "Coffee Shop"... |
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| 10/07/2005 11:09:12 AM |
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| 10/06/2005 09:00:57 PM |
For my one and only love!!by gtp1164Comment: Greetings from the Critique Club
What a beautiful rendition of a rose. Nicely captured, good and crisp where needed, soft where appropriate.
While I like it a lot, I wonder if the background could be cropped just a little on the left (say up to the last leaf) and then again on the right. (oh, about 1/3 of the distance between the frame and the flower) Would this concentrate the viewer more on the rose, rather than the mildly distracting background? Hard to say. Just another way to look at this splendid flower.
I would suggest blurring out more of the background to really direct the viewer to the flower.
It really is a lovely image. Keep up the good work. |
| 10/06/2005 08:50:29 PM |
Memorial dayby jonasvalComment: Greetings from the Critique Club
Beautifully executed image of this church and its surroundings. I very much like the angle from which you captured this structure. Technically, I think it's just fine. Compositionally, it's also strong.
You have created the essence of a bleak landscape which seems to embody loss.
It may be this bleakness worked against your scoring a little. If so, it would be simply because the voters didn't understand the beauty of your interpretation.
Good luck in your future Challenges. I'll look forward to seeing more of your work. |
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| 10/06/2005 08:38:18 PM |
"Having a Bad Day?" Encouragement cardby tmorninglory96Comment: Greetings from the Critique Club
I think I remember this guy from voting in the Challenge. He was a friendly looking guy then and still is. He definitely looks as if he could give you a nice, comforting pat on the back whenever you need it.
Expressive face, well photographed. Background is nicely neutral and I like the Black 'n White treatment.
From your portfolio, you seem to be a "People-type" person and your images of people are just great.
About all I can offer you is encouragement. 6.13 isn't bad, but keep doing what you are doing and undoubtedly those scores will go up even higher. |
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| 10/05/2005 07:59:28 PM |
Waking Up With Redby rasdubComment: Which ever of my San Francisco friends took this one is to be complimented! It's a great shot. |
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| 10/04/2005 10:56:13 PM |
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| 10/04/2005 10:53:49 PM |
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| 10/04/2005 10:53:02 PM |
Cabbagetownby elemessComment: Your corner is a busy one, but it all fits quite well in the frame. |
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